Is this sonnet okay?

Question

When I switch hard-flipped down the thirteen stair.
I was happy ‘cause I nailed the trick.
The Pro that was didn’t even care.
But I didn’t mind ‘cause the trick was sick.

My one and only passion is to skate.
I love the sound of landing a hard move.
People get in my was and that’s what I hate
When I have my Ipod in I’m in the groove.

I warm up when we arrive at the spot.
I am warming up for something I love
I like photos so they take a good shot
Falling down is something I am sick of.

I love to skateboard in many places.
And making new friends with different faces

Answer 1

Very nice - I can relate, my son skates. He's 15 - please make sure you wear your helmet when you're doing tricks or jumps!! Have you skated @ Volcom in Mammoth? - it's my son's favorite. have fun & be wise.