The author’s memorial of Dachau concentration camp, and her political view of Nazism.
2007-03-22 15:54:35 · 9 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
By the way, this is not supposed to be a sentence. It SHOULD be a fragment!!
2007-03-22 16:18:59 · update #1
All I need is a grammar correction.
2007-03-22 16:19:39 · update #2
That does not make sense. What of her political view?
2007-03-22 15:59:55 · answer #1 · answered by Justina 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
It is missing something -- it is only part of a sentence. It's hard to guess the rest of what you're trying to say, but here's an example.
This book details the author's memories of the Dachau concentration camp and her political view of Nazism.
2007-03-22 16:07:56 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is not a sentence. Where are your verbs?
Perhaps you meant:
This is the author's memorial of Dachau camp and her political view of Nazism.
You don't need a comma before the and since you don't have a new subject and verb in the second half of this fragment.
2007-03-22 16:04:14 · answer #3 · answered by onanist13 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
This is a fragment, not a complete sentence. And "Dachau Concentration Camp" should be capitalized. No comma necessary.
2007-03-22 16:04:14 · answer #4 · answered by CR 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
do no longer positioned a comma after Korean, it incredibly is optionally available yet makes your sentence look over punctuated. It sounds slightly awkward, i might recommend "and familiar with grammar syntax."
2016-10-01 08:43:13 · answer #5 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its a fragment, not a complete sentence.
2007-03-22 16:03:41 · answer #6 · answered by GC 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Its a fragment. What about the athours memorial?
2007-03-22 16:11:17 · answer #7 · answered by pianogurl823 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You do not need the , after camp. It is alright after you take that out.
2007-03-22 15:57:12 · answer #8 · answered by ruth4526 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I would replace 'memorial' with 'memoirs'. If 'memorial' is to be retained, then I would replace 'of' by 'to'.
2007-03-23 02:08:51 · answer #9 · answered by greenhorn 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋