Due to the advances in technology, society and a prospering economy, the daily lives of Americans changed and formed a lucrative America.
2007-03-22 13:17:23 · 9 answers · asked by mayris 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
The impact of technology, society and a prospering economy on the acquisition of wealth and daily living in America
How's this--- it should be worded in a way that invites interest and inquiry. Your phrasing suggests a conclusion, the new phrasing suggests that this an inquiry into the impact as opposed to a far gone conclusion. You want to leave it open so people will read it. It also makes good impression should you want to publish it in a refereed journal.
2007-03-22 13:29:29 · answer #1 · answered by Wisdom??? 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
The daily lives of Americans have changed, and a lucrative America has been formed, due to the advances intechnology, society, and a prospering economy.
What you had sounded like the daily lives formed a lucrative America - and I don't think that's what you meant to say.
2007-03-22 20:26:29 · answer #2 · answered by liddabet 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
The daily lives of Americans has changed with the advances in technology, society and a prospering economy, forming the lucrative America we see today.
or
Lucrative America was formed through the technological, societal, and economical changes in American daily life.
Or divide it into two sentences...
Many changes have occured to the daily lives of Americans that has contributed to the formation of our modern, lucrative America. These changes are due to advances in technology, society, and a prospering economy.
2007-03-22 20:26:08 · answer #3 · answered by Chali 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Americans daily lives have changed because of advances in technology, creating a prospering and lucrative economy within the society.
2007-03-22 20:24:44 · answer #4 · answered by Tropicalboy 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Advances in technology, society, and a prospering economy have led to a lucrative American culture. As a result, the daily lives of Americans have been significantly impacted.
2007-03-22 20:25:18 · answer #5 · answered by mongo22 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
The lives of Americans have changed dramatically due to advances in technology, society, and a prospering economy.
Maybe that would work, I just inverted the sentence a bit
2007-03-22 20:21:23 · answer #6 · answered by Beauty Junkie ♥ 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
American is now a productive nation because of its advances in technology and society. These advances have changed the daily lives of Americans and have helped to build a strong and prosperous economy.
Does this help? You can have more than one scentence in your thesis statement you know.
2007-03-22 20:25:42 · answer #7 · answered by ? 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Because of our superior advances in to days technology, our daily lives as Americans have been reformed as a phenomenal endeavor to keep up with the society around us.
2007-03-22 20:49:57 · answer #8 · answered by baby face. 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I'd start with "The daily lives of Americans changed ... (be more specific there, how did they change?)" then end with the "because of... (the advances, etc etc)"
2007-03-22 20:20:58 · answer #9 · answered by Goldom 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋