Hey………what do u think of my song? Please be honest :)
A True Friend
All I’ve ever wanted never happened never happened to me
I thought I had them but it was all just a fantasy dream
You didn’t know what a friend is, but you claim that you do
And you still though I’d be here for you
But I can’t rebound after what you put me through
It doesn’t matter what clothes I wear, and why should I bleach my hair
I hate how you think I should care
It’s not important what brand I tote
If I’m wearing TJ Maxx or a fur coat
What happened to the inside that counts
Why are you ignoring me cuz I gained 2 pounds
If I’m listening to screamo, why do you give me frowns
Why do you laugh when I get A’s
You tell me I’m a nerd, and “get out of my face”
I’ll explain to you exactly what I need
It’s the kind of person you’ll never ever be
2007-03-22 13:09:23 · 26 answers · asked by Argiiii. 5 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
*Chorus*
A friend is someone who:
Gives you chances when you don’t deserve them
Teaches you lessons and time to learn them
Loans a shoulder you could wipe your tears on
Doesn’t care what social class you came from
Would be there for thru your rights and wrongs
Has the power to make you write a happy song
Gives you hope and tells you to march on
Makes you smile when everything’s gone
You’re not a friend, and my only wish is to have one
I had this boyfriend last year
And I saw how you whispered in his ear
Just friends right?
Till I saw that kiss
Now try to explain this
You were wondering why I was so pissed
But it’s not my boyfriend that I only miss
There’s a lot more things
Take a look at my list
You didn’t talk to me the day I had a zit
I painted my nails black, you dropped me in a pit
You went to someone else’s party on my birthday
I like emo guys, you labeled me gay
I’m sick of your **** I don’t like to get hit with your ***** slamming
2007-03-22 13:10:08 · update #1
Leave me alone and I’ll stop writing about you
So I’m not the stupid one, all along you were the fool
Chorus x1
Look, it’s over, I don’t like you no more
Why should I carry your highness on my back for?
Chorus x2
2007-03-22 13:10:34 · update #2
sry, forgot to say.......its like rock-punk-screamo, like the used:)
2007-03-22 15:55:22 · update #3
I lyk the chorus but as far as the verses go...theyre too simple. I mean, I like the words and message but the rhymes could be more complex. I luv writing songs. =]
2007-03-22 13:14:43 · answer #1 · answered by Everybody Loves Mia <3 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If I heard what it gave the impression of then perhaps I might reply this larger, but it surely appears lovely well, and I consider I could concentrate to it on instances... It turns out somewhat quick and could simplest be like a a million:30 and so much songs are approximately two:00-four:00 mins lengthy... but it surely appears adore it could be a well music... Hope I helped...
2016-09-05 12:33:29 · answer #2 · answered by cales 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
you know you totally got the BEST songs ever, and write so good. I love this, and i wished there was so much more to it that you could have wrote. I applaud you on this. Great Work!
2007-03-23 08:14:06 · answer #3 · answered by ♥mcmanda♥ 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Very Good
2007-03-22 13:12:03 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
Hmm....sounds like someone wants a True Friend...
xD
It's good.
2007-03-22 13:16:59 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
honestly that's not song material, That's just something you'd write in your journal but nothing More would ever become of that.
2007-03-22 13:18:03 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
That's awesome! i love how personal it is. you put yourself out on a limb, opening up like that but u suceeded! GOOD JOB!
2007-03-22 13:15:42 · answer #7 · answered by Ren 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I REALLY love that! You should write more lyrics! That would be awesome....I'm being truly honset with you! Keep up the good work ^.^
2007-03-22 13:13:51 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
Its got good lyrics i hope its sounds good
2007-03-22 13:18:01 · answer #9 · answered by Wesley™ 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sux Azz
LOL
Im kidding, it was actually a really good song!!! I like it alot
2007-03-22 13:18:24 · answer #10 · answered by wonderfullyhuman_99 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋