I just wrote it down in class today. I am gonan add more on:
It's a wonderful night,
For a night time drive.
The moon and stars,
Are out of day's clever disguise.
The soft bright light softly glows,
Comes down off your shoulders,
To your toes.
2007-03-22 12:52:04 · 5 answers · asked by thinkGREEN 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
can you say why you do or don't like it? thanks
2007-03-22 12:59:24 · update #1
I think its beautiful. I love how descriptive you are and your use of words. Just your whole writing style is really very nice. So i think you´re poems already great so far and i cant wait to see the rest of it. Keep up the good work. =)
2007-03-22 15:20:59 · answer #1 · answered by Jaded 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I truly like that. it is very nice. your keep up with the writing of poems, you have talent.
Good Luck with school and all
I made up a song once that was brought to Johnny Cash to see if he liked it .some friends were playing it in there band.it was the fourth song i ever created, later i heard some of the verses on the radio in a song.someone stole my lines,so don't share with the world all your poems are songs ,as you may one actually do something with them.OK?
2007-03-22 20:02:13 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Very nice and Romantic
2007-03-22 19:59:47 · answer #3 · answered by eeyoree rocks2003 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I don't like it.
2007-03-22 19:56:32 · answer #4 · answered by Ohmygoodness 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋
BEAutiful...great, i like it so far! :)
2007-03-22 19:56:22 · answer #5 · answered by ♥ MEOW ♥ 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋