Is this a comma splice?

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Is this a comma splice?

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This proposal also intends to encourage students’ participation and to achieve some benefits that are the result of collaborative work in classrooms, for instance, to improve attendance because of their commitment to others in their group

2007-03-22 08:12:53 · 2 answers · asked by malejisa 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities

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No, it's not. Try putting a dash after "classrooms." I think that would help. :)

2007-03-22 08:22:01 · answer #1 · answered by Denise 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋

No. There's only one independent clause. But it is awkward. You might try breaking it down into two sentences.

2007-03-22 15:18:02 · answer #2 · answered by Lleh 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋