Have you seen people react to blood gushing in the bowl when they flush the toilet in a lonely building?

Question

This was a college library, close to the finals. A wintry night and the building was open late for bespectacled bookworms. By coincidence there were two suicides in Halloween and this particular day was Friday the thirteenth. The studs were out of favor and the nerds were in business. I had this Junior Einstein leaning to one side under the weight of reference manuals and weighty texts being popped up by a bevy of clueless damsels that partied hard during the semester but now needed the Juniors expertise to complete their term papers. Guys like me were definitely out of favor since my academics were questionable at best and deplorable at worst. Being alone and vindictive I decided to lace the toilet tank with ruby red dye. Soon Junior went in to take care of his Junior and came out screaming .. speechless .. spectacles bouncing on sweaty brows. His buddy a logical sort went in and was on way out screaming when he tripped and fell on the wet floor. Will the shower be a good choice next?

Answer 1

A cruel trick, despite the intended, but a good one. The shower would be very Anthony Perkins, but it would also scare the hell out of anyone in the vicinity. Have to be careful about the dye though, else you'll have red people running around for weeks.

Answer 2

Once upon a time in a faraway land I was walking down the street when I picked up this paper that had fluttered out of someone's car and landed right beside me. Hark, what a coincidence, I had been wanting to read something, and here is something to read, what a lucky day for me! It was a story someone had written, much like the one that you just wrote. I was grateful that it had not been published, but had been trashed instead. I put it where it belonged and should have been put anyway, in the nearest trashcan, and continued on my way to the land of faraway.

Answer 3

If you're hoping to take up writing as a profession, your skills need some work. Less work than a lot of other people on yahoo answers, but work nonetheless. I could edit your offering if you really want me to.

Answer 4

I strongly suggest u take up writing as a career, despite what all these F...... are writing about you......ignore the ignorants. They are incapable of appreciation.........

Answer 5

You write nice !
But its bit too poetic, though maybe thats wat makes it different...

just dont try the shower trick on the weak hearted...may cause an attack!