Some say she's a beauty
And some say she's a queen
Some say she's a special girl
But I think she's obscene
Cause her tops are low cut
And jeans are hanging low
And all the guys wonder
How far she'll let them go
Chorus
She's a sl*t
And you know she's not fussy
Cause she gets around
And is such a shameless hussy
She's a tart
There's passion her her eyes
If you let her in
She'll trick you with her lies
She's a sl*t
She's just a girl
But some say she's a goddess
She's kind of magic
Not power you can supress
She's a siren
A mermaid with a fin
But don't you touch her
Or you'll let her win
Chorus
2007-03-22 01:29:08 · 19 answers · asked by Dreamer 4 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
Wow cool. You gotta put some beat to it. Reminds me of the
"Black Magic Woman" song.
2007-03-22 11:55:25 · answer #1 · answered by Kaliyug Ka Plato 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Not bad, not bad at all. It is very obvious that you really do not like this girl, I say that because songs and poems are written from personal experience.
I know that it is very cathartic to put your words onto paper when you have a deep deep feeling towards someone or something, it clears your mind so you can get on with living.
Keep it going, who knows where it will take you.
2007-03-22 07:27:40 · answer #2 · answered by Nigel T 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
your song is dog do do but what do you think to this. i think i'm gonna go for a piano intro:-
Imagine there's no heaven
It's easy if you try
No hell below us
Above us only sky
Imagine all the people
Living for today...
Imagine there's no countries
It isn't hard to do
Nothing to kill or die for
And no religion too
Imagine all the people
Living life in peace...
You may say I'm a dreamer
But I'm not the only one
I hope someday you'll join us
And the world will be as one
Imagine no possessions
I wonder if you can
No need for greed or hunger
A brotherhood of man
Imagine all the people
Sharing all the world...
You may say I'm a dreamer
But I'm not the only one
I hope someday you'll join us
And the world will live as one
2007-03-22 01:44:44 · answer #3 · answered by gh7432 1 · 1⤊ 2⤋
I would give it marks out of ten as in 7 - you may increase if you remove the word s...t though. Also it is rather poetic and you should produce more, well done.
2007-03-22 02:10:17 · answer #4 · answered by deep in thought 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Might work with an old school heavy metal band.
2007-03-22 01:37:34 · answer #5 · answered by meerkat 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Is it a song a pole dancer has written?
2007-03-22 01:35:27 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Great song
2007-03-22 01:33:24 · answer #7 · answered by Gypsy Gal 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
very good, what's the tune?
PS don't like the word sl*t though.
PSS are you jealous of this girl????
2007-03-22 04:14:02 · answer #8 · answered by lazybird2006 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think your song is awsome!! Your right shes a s@*$!!!!!
2007-03-22 04:14:59 · answer #9 · answered by anita l 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋
nope
2007-03-22 01:36:27 · answer #10 · answered by wolfwagon2002 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋