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Witches chanting,
dwelling on the pain their granting.
hummed words cross their lips,
sacrificial knives upon their hips.
offered girl dressed in white,
her neck will bleed tonight.

shaman praying,
not knowing the words he's saying.
mumbled noise pours from heart,
to save virgins virtued heart.
sacred girl beneith moon light,
shall her life be saved to night.

Its only a rough start so please be kind

2007-03-21 19:46:50 · 6 answers · asked by Ash 6 in Society & Culture Mythology & Folklore

6 answers

i like it it gives me a nice visual picture but if i were you i wouldn't post my poem on here for everyone to see alot of people will steal it and claim it as theres

2007-03-21 20:13:48 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

Well lets see here, it is great if you are a demon worshiper about to sacrifice a virgin so the demon will give you demonic powers, but in the real world those are very telling words, of satanism and witchcraft and blood sacrifice which are all demonic.
So the conclusion you have a demon or 2 and you need to break free and get your self free. Now the only way to do this is in Jesus name! I know you wont but when they demand payment and you cant pay the price call on the name of Jesus and he will set you free from the demonic powers.
http://www.freedomcame.com/glory

2007-03-21 21:25:12 · answer #2 · answered by bungyow 5 · 1 1

slightly boy needed $a hundred.00 very badly and prayed for weeks, yet not something exceeded off. Then he desperate to jot down God a letter asking for the $a hundred.00. while the postal government won the letter to God , usa , they desperate to deliver it to the President. The president became so amused that he steered his secretary to deliver the little boy a $5.00 invoice. The president concept this might seem to be a good form of money to slightly boy. The little boy became overjoyed with the $5.00 invoice and sat right down to jot down a thank-you notice to God, which examine: expensive God: thank you very plenty for sending the money. even although, i spotted that it became postmarked Washington , DC., and those jerks deducted $ninety 5.00 in taxes.

2016-11-27 21:31:57 · answer #3 · answered by ? 4 · 0 0

I like it! It gives just enough details for me to get a visual as to how your seeing it. Now you have to post the rest! ,

2007-03-21 20:07:54 · answer #4 · answered by candy w 4 · 0 0

sounds great - keep going

2007-03-21 21:18:56 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

cool keep going on and you will be famous.

2007-03-22 02:31:45 · answer #6 · answered by cutie pie 1 · 0 0

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