its called: "NEVER"....
Never say "i love you"
If you really dont care
Never talk about feelings
If they arent really there
Never hold my hand
If you are going to break my heart
Never say you are going to
If you dont plan to start
Never look into my eyes
If all you do is lie
Never say "hello"
If you really mean "good-bye"
If you really mean forever
Then say you will try
Never say "forever"
Cause forever makes me cry.
2007-03-21 18:46:03 · 10 answers · asked by Itsjustme 5 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Philosophy
Excellent poem.
it gives us perspectives what to look out for so we don't get hurt by others nor do we hurt others.
2007-03-21 23:20:29 · answer #1 · answered by oscar c 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow, that's good, nice rhymes, it flows very well, if i didn't know better ild say that a professional poet wrote this! (r u a pro?) u really get the point across!
2007-03-22 01:56:44 · answer #2 · answered by Patrick B 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Permutation of never
Approximate to forever
Zero over one
one over Zero
2007-03-22 02:08:57 · answer #3 · answered by Der UnMensch 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
When you get to the 666th one you've ever written, then consider it a poem.
A poem must have a secret.
2007-03-22 09:05:11 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
its nice and has a good rhythm and rhyme
it has all hte elements of a poem
but is rather lacking in class and sophistication.
i like it though :)
2007-03-22 06:58:58 · answer #5 · answered by pitchaya. 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yeah it's really nice!
2007-03-22 02:00:58 · answer #6 · answered by kartic03 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
It is an affront to good taste.
It is hackneyed, childish, and naive.
It sucks.
Unless you're twelve and heart-broken, in which case it's good that you're getting this crap out of your system.
2007-03-22 01:58:48 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 3⤋
Nice, very nice!
2007-03-22 02:09:48 · answer #8 · answered by Biqo 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it.....just set it to music now. =)
2007-03-22 01:54:58 · answer #9 · answered by Mrs.Fine 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I think that it is a wonderul poem!
2007-03-22 01:50:39 · answer #10 · answered by Kristina G 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋