Is this a Good Rap By Me? New Verse.?
Tell me if you think this is good. Im hispanic had a rough and hectic childhood and live in Nashville,TN
email me at gvchavez@bellsouth.net This is freestyle and it is all true.
Song:
I did school in the closet of a doctors office. I'd been kicked out of everywhere else for bein obnoxious. even though it was a hard situation i strived cause i had a dedication to education. Because here oppurtunities are few and far between life is hard and mean I played my cards like a rhyme scheme.
Sometimes id get mad and slit my wrists in the bathtub they'd calm me down with a backrub and i'd look at life and crack up.
I dont wanna be a school shooter doin a blast boom I get mad at the teacher and blow her *** all over the classroom.
Remember when the vice pres shot his lawer? maybe the layer killed his father and Cheneys diego montoya. Well thats all id like a standing ovation or maybe an invitation to party or a nice vacation. thats all i can fit in
2007-03-21 14:31:54 · 20 answers · asked by Jackson B 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
I seriously had no where to go so mom gave me some grammar books to study and shut the door. she worked at the desk of a doctors office. Id hang in that tiny a ss space all day.
2007-03-21 14:38:15 · update #1
Im sorry about the violence part and profanity I was saying i didnt wanna get messed up and shoot up a school.
2007-03-21 14:41:03 · update #2
I said I strive for education because this is the real world and I wanna be respected. I aint some gangsta.
2007-03-21 15:11:45 · update #3
It was a freestyle not a prewritten song. I dont need tips about staying on subject alright.
2007-03-22 02:00:55 · update #4
I was rappin pretty evil sh it so i tried to tone it down it came out like some kanye west- common like thing. I'm not that into it. Mos def not my best freestyle.
2007-03-22 18:24:18 · update #5
umm its ok but like kinda different.
i mean not many other rappers strive for education.
its new and good. i mean it could use some work but watever.
umm i LOVE THE PRINCESS BRIDE REFERENCE!! that is so the best movie ever!! very very good.
2007-03-21 14:38:38 · answer #1 · answered by .. .. 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I don't like most of the new crap. I like old school rap though. Like Run DMC, Eazy E, Too $hort, Geto Boys, N.W.A., Beastie Boys, Gucci Crew, 2 live Crew, The D.O.C., Digital Underground, Doug E. Fresh, Slick Rick, Egyptian Lover, Ice T, Kid Frost, LL Cool J, MC Lyte, MC Shy D, Young MC, Whodini, 2pac, Stetsasonic, Snoop Dogg, Sir Mix-A-Lot, Rob Base & DJ EZ Rock, and Public Enemy. Now that's music! Sorry, I got carried away. I do think you have some writing abilities. You need to spend alot of time refining your songs, until you make them as good as you can. Also you need to stay on subject and not skip around quite so much. If this is what you want to do then stick with it and work hard, and maybe someday you will be famous or something. Good Luck!
2007-03-21 22:05:04 · answer #2 · answered by sublime1973 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Rap is declining and on it's way out. Just look at the decline in record sales the past year. Maybe synthpop and New Wave will come back.
2007-03-21 21:35:42 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Certainly didnt like the verse about the teacher, since I am a teacher
2007-03-21 21:36:36 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
I don't like rap. I can listen to anything from country to heavy metal to techo-but don't give me rap.
However, your rhymes were original and unique, which is what matters. Good job.
2007-03-21 21:44:04 · answer #5 · answered by cstravagante 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I dont get how you did school in the closet of a Dr.'s office...
what does that mean?
2007-03-21 21:35:27 · answer #6 · answered by indieassassin 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Fun
2007-03-21 21:35:32 · answer #7 · answered by lhuckabone09 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I do not enjoy rap, i just answered this for 2 points.
2007-03-21 21:35:23 · answer #8 · answered by morningstaar321 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I don't like rap. Nice rhyme, though!
2007-03-21 21:35:51 · answer #9 · answered by killer queen 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Rap is crap.
But poetry is cool.
If I look at it in that point of view.. It`s deep.
Has a message ringing around in it.
2007-03-21 21:35:39 · answer #10 · answered by Samantha P 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋