Did I do good summarizing and analyzing these Haikus?

Question

“With a twitching nose
A dog reads a telegram
On a wet tree trunk.”

This haiku written by Richard Wright has a playful side. It simply tells the story of how one dog is “reading” a “telegram” from another dog. It describes the scene and still manages to follow the 5-7-5 rule!!!

“From these warm spring days,
I can still see her sad face
In its last autumn.”

Richard Wright wrote this poem when a woman he knew was about to die. He remembers her “sad face” from “these warm spring days” in the autumn that she is about to die or “its last autumn.

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Answer 1

the first one.................. not so good
the second.............. one great

Answer 2

I give you an A. Pax - C.