Ok, I have written a song. It does not rhyme through the whole thing and it's pretty unconventional. Is that ok? I guess it sounds better if you hear the way it's sung. Anyway, what do you think of them...or can you guess what it's about?
"She wastes the day again in her room alone
black makeup, lipstick, and no one else is home
I think she's finally lost her mind
I know she's finally lost her mind
This is so twisted, this is not me at all
She tries to tell me that I don't need them all
She say's, everyone is an enemy
She say's, everyone is an enemy
So we'll hide again tonight
Not a thing I say or do will ever make this right
I think she's finally lost her mind
I know she's finally lost her mind
This is so twisted, this is not me at all
She tries to tell me that I don't need them all
She say's, everyone is an enemy
She say's, everyone is an enemy"
2007-03-21 12:50:22 · 3 answers · asked by Ryan H 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
It sounds like a girlfriend who is gothic and hates everyone because she thinks they will harm her. and that you think its weird and that you want her to stop being gothic and be a normal person again.
2007-03-21 12:54:48 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Pretty good. I like unconventional things.
2007-03-21 19:54:37 · answer #2 · answered by Abby 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I love it :)
2007-03-21 19:53:04 · answer #3 · answered by fraydar_at_its_finest 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋