I need to reword this sentence to exclude the "me" and would like to retain the positive words "key strengths" and "valuable". (this is for my wife actually, thanks!) She also doesnt want I or me anywhere in the sentence. Im guessing "my" would be acceptable.
Im at a brain freeze and cant seem to come up with anything that sounds good!
"The key strengths that make me valuable for this position include, but not limited to, the following:"
2007-03-21 11:33:29 · 3 answers · asked by Anonymous in Business & Finance ➔ Careers & Employment
The following key strengths are a valuable asset for this position:
2007-03-21 11:48:46 · answer #1 · answered by Sheryl R 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I have never got a job I not apply for; First I do a little research into the company and the personnel manager that do the interviews. My approach to "Rezoomees" is adjustable to the research I do.
From a general approach, as I not know from what you say, here my cover page;
To whom it concerns (Usually I have the name)
IF, You do not feel I can benefit your company, then DO NOT read further! I DO NOT want to work for a company I can not benefit!
Today's companies are on the verge of mass competition and try to reserve their resources in this fight for the top. I enjoy the fight and want the company I work for to be on top. If, you feel I am the asset your company needs to succeed, then begin your journey into what I can do for you and read the following pages.
2007-03-21 19:07:02 · answer #2 · answered by Snaglefritz 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
A cover letter is not the same as a resume. The words "me", "I", "my", etc., are perfectly acceptable. "Include but not limited to" makes it sound like a sweepstakes offer.
How about: "I feel I can add value to your company because my key strengths are a,b,c......" Simple writing is better.
2007-03-21 19:12:38 · answer #3 · answered by Mel 6 · 1⤊ 1⤋