Won't be the last time...
Feeling a bit run down today
But I dont mind because lifes going ok
Supose its just the emptyness of not knowing who to be
Trying to fit in and at the same time wanting to be me.
Ive got a good idea though
I'll just lay in bed again
And let the days troubles float away
While I can dream and drink endless cups of tea with custard creams.
At about half past five I'll probably get up
And watch the evening news
And feel guilty for thinking I had problems of my own
As I remember moaning I had too much food to eat
and complaining about having no money
cause I spent it on a pair of jeans I know I'll never wear.
I shall smoke my daily 'last ever cigarette'
Drag myself to bed
I'll think to myself 'man what a day I've had!'
And fall asleep in the knowledge
that this won't be the last time I spend all day in my pajamas.
2007-03-21 06:07:54 · 10 answers · asked by Lindsay T 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
very nice, i like it
2007-03-21 06:10:22 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
10/10
2007-03-21 06:13:29 · answer #2 · answered by Moona 5 · 0⤊ 1⤋
On a scale of 1-10, 1 being the not good I will give you a 9, now go to Poetry.com and copyright it. Well Done.
2007-03-21 06:16:10 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i give it about 8 outta 10
you can improve by rhyming some more words but still keeping the little story of the poem as good as it is and for any future poems just...just try and stuff a flipping image in the readers head, use your words carefully so u can create a picture of what your talking about in the readers mind.
KEEP IT UP !
2007-03-21 06:13:37 · answer #4 · answered by Outsider 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Pretty good! 7/10
2007-03-21 06:13:53 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like the meaning.....I'll give it a 6/10.
2007-03-21 06:11:50 · answer #6 · answered by ♥Amanda♥ 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i liked it :) 7/10
2007-03-21 06:16:54 · answer #7 · answered by Me 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
out of a 10 i would give u a 6.5
2007-03-21 06:11:33 · answer #8 · answered by 0 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i share the feelings in this poem on such a regular basis. very down to earth. i like it
2007-03-21 06:11:54 · answer #9 · answered by the_real_peagen 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's funny, but so true. I like it! :D
2007-03-21 06:11:37 · answer #10 · answered by ħ Ì Wêår M¥ Mê?ål Må§k 5 · 1⤊ 0⤋