That day that you said we were thru
With bags packed, I quess its true
I never thought this time would come
We had made plans, to live as one
I gave my heart, I gave my soul
For you and me, were to grow old
I feel just like a beaten man
With no where to go, and with no plan
With heart torn pieces thrown everywhere
I look around and do not care
I need to start my life again
I know now how, I know not when
I know I’ve played this game before
This time I hoped for so much more
I had hope this time, would be forever
I learned this time, it just is never
I am here to say to older fems
If you want me now, I’ll try again
I have my pictures, here on line
Show me yours, I’ll show you mine
2007-03-21 00:55:48 · 13 answers · asked by gary_b04901 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Marriage & Divorce
1. 5
2007-03-21 01:09:42 · answer #1 · answered by prabhakar_ace 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
2
2007-03-21 01:00:22 · answer #2 · answered by James B 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
5
2007-03-21 03:16:19 · answer #3 · answered by sylviavnpttn 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
5
2007-03-21 00:59:57 · answer #4 · answered by T-spooon 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
8
2007-03-21 01:02:25 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I give it a 9
The entire poem, except for the last part, was very touching.
The last part about older fems and pictures on-line took a point away.
If you are looking, I hope you find someone.
2007-03-21 01:44:44 · answer #6 · answered by ~•over the moon•~ 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
8. it was touching exceept for the last part. why not find someone in person. Not using the net. i know it is the wave we are in now but it is much better to find true love when you are not tryign so hard. good luck.
2007-03-21 01:00:47 · answer #7 · answered by hascht2 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It had a good beat, and i could really dance to it I gave it a nine.
2007-03-21 01:07:29 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
i understand the true meaning of the poem, but it doesnt have the....seasoning. try adding some more fluent words, but overall id rate it a 9.5
2007-03-21 00:58:51 · answer #9 · answered by Bumble 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is really heart warming. You are really good and i give it a "10."
2007-03-21 01:01:03 · answer #10 · answered by 2sweet4u 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋