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What do you do when your demons,
Come crawling back to your door?
Hungry times when looks are lean,
What is my faith for?
All the lies I've seen through now,
Old mirrors that shade a view.
All this time I've been searching out the truth.

So break free!
Hold on to the memories,
It's all we've got.
I'll always be there,
With your forevermore.
Hold on to the memories,
It's all we've got.
I'll always be there,
With you forevermore.

Harness a bit of joyousness
Grasp onto the ropes tightly
Got to fight to get somewhere
Getting back the life you once knew
Harder times come and gone, what they put me through
I hid my eyes, shame used to guide me till I met you

So break free
Hold on to the memories,
It's all we've got.
I'll always be there,
With your forevermore.
Hold on to the memories,
It's all we've got.
I'll always be there,
With your forevermore.

2007-03-20 21:45:40 · 4 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music Music

4 answers

I really like the two main verses, and i think they could work quite well in a song, but the chorus needs some work, think about the times in your life when you have really felt that your inner demons were returning ....draw on that, i really think your chorus could be made better simply by recalling that feeling.

2007-03-20 22:52:37 · answer #1 · answered by Mintjulip 6 · 0 0

Not Bad! It would make a good song...

2007-03-21 05:21:03 · answer #2 · answered by kalerei_fury 4 · 0 0

What type of genre?

2007-03-21 12:51:21 · answer #3 · answered by ? 7 · 0 0

wud make a gud song.

2007-03-21 04:49:27 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

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