Harry Angstrom, the main character in the book Rabbit Run, and Benjamin Braddock, from the film The Graduate, although vary slightly, have many things in common.
2007-03-20 17:14:30 · 4 answers · asked by fidel209 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
There's something wrong with "although vary slightly." How about "though slightly different."
2007-03-20 17:19:21 · answer #1 · answered by Bestie 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Harry Angstrom, the main character in the book Rabbit Run, and Benjamin Braddock, from the film The Graduate, are essentially similar characters who vary only slightly.
However, a good thesis statement should include your 3 similarities and one difference.
Ex: Harry Angstrom, the main character in the book Rabbit Run, and Benjamin Braddock, from the film The Graduate, share their _____, _____, and ____ but differ in their _____.
Don't forget to underline the titles of your novel and movie.
2007-03-20 18:32:53 · answer #2 · answered by kaseandannasmom 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Harry Angstrom,the main character in the book Rabbit Run and Benjamin Braddock, from the film The Graduate, though they are slightly different they still have many things in common.
try that
2007-03-20 17:30:38 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yep, that 'although vary slightly'' seems to get in the way. Change it around a bit. and it's not really a run-on sentence.
Um, try:
Harry Angstrom, the main character in the book Rabbit Run, and Benjamin Braddock, from the film The Graduate, have many things in common although it varies slightly.
2007-03-20 17:24:05 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋