Please let me know what you think of this poem.
Does it Matter
Awake or asleep
it doesn't really matter
the thought Keep.
There are day
I wish I were alive
There are days
I do so strive.
Alive or dead
is it really going to matter
the things I've said?
I can't redo
think things I' ve done wrong
No-one will remember
Once my life is non.
Levonna M Biddle
Copyright ©2007 Levonna M Biddle
2007-03-20 16:13:13 · 4 answers · asked by ? 4 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
kinda depressing. cheer up
2007-03-20 16:21:09 · answer #1 · answered by Sundown 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
in your heart you strive to reach a place of peacefulness,find it where you find your most inner strength comes from.People are out there that do care and are touched by these words.God is listening too. you just have to listen for the answer
2007-03-21 15:52:48 · answer #2 · answered by resigned 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that's pretty sad.
2007-03-20 23:21:01 · answer #3 · answered by Samantha 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its very good.
2007-03-20 23:20:42 · answer #4 · answered by karen v 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋