i got really depressed one day so i wrote this poem out of nowhere and luckily, it got published too!! i had my days >,>
My Secret Shadow:::::
Feels like the world is split into two;
Everything that’s happening is light and dark.
In the day I conceal myself with a mask,
Hoping to be seen among others.
To be noticed just to not be alone,
My second face shows no sadness.
A face showing no emotions
Only a smile to show the world.
The eye sees that I am ordinary.
But when the sun begins to fade,
I return to where I belong while
There is little daylight left.
Darkness has finally set in,
A moon its only weakness.
My mask begins to fade
By the dimness of the closing minutes.
A tear drop of sadness,
Anger soon to take control.
I quickly turn on the lamp
To save my dying smile.
The stillness of the night triumphs
Until the dark is awakened by brightness.
Tonight, my only companion will be
My secret shadow.
2007-03-20 15:56:11 · 8 answers · asked by musikartguy05 3 in Family & Relationships ➔ Friends
wow !great! how did you come up with this some sort of bloody imagination. Just continue nurturing your talent. be a great poet soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
2007-03-20 16:05:40 · answer #1 · answered by pyrrhus 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Right on dude! That was deep.
2007-03-20 16:20:51 · answer #2 · answered by ~Val~ 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
is awsome men i will take borrow this poem to create a song, is yours only i will practice singin it ok?
2007-03-20 16:10:46 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
Dude..its soo cool.
Very talented....NICE!!
2007-03-27 13:39:51 · answer #4 · answered by Pepper 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
That's pretty good, but nothing rhymes.
2007-03-26 12:12:01 · answer #5 · answered by Crissy C 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
ewwwwww its so..... emo .........emos are stupid cuz they r all like look at me i have issues ...o im depressed im gunna cut my self .... they r idiots!!
2007-03-28 12:44:36 · answer #6 · answered by skitz 3 · 0⤊ 2⤋
i feel blood dripping !
2007-03-20 15:59:56 · answer #7 · answered by rottentothecore 5 · 0⤊ 2⤋
its ok!
2007-03-20 16:03:35 · answer #8 · answered by bubblegumgirl07 1 · 0⤊ 2⤋