Can you please make some grammar or spelling suggestion? Thanks...?

Question

Socio-occupational integration and development of clinical skills are important component of transition (Kramer cited by Evans 2001). A focus group collected data among nine newly qualified child health from across central and east London. The aim of the focus group was to reveal the expectation and concerns of the newly qualified nurses. The group of the newly qualified nurses stated that interactions with experience nurses play a significant role in social and professional integration. This means Preceptors can assist the newly qualified nurses to integrate into nursing profession and manage their performance through acting as a role module and providing guidance and feed back on their performance (Evans 2001).

Answer 1

Socio-occupational integration and clinical skills are significant components of transition, (Kramer cited by Evans 2001). In a focus group consisting of , collected data from nine newly qualified child health in central and east London. The goal of the focus group was to reveal the expectations and concerns of newly qualified nurses. The nurses from the sample group stated that interactions with experienced nurses play a significant role in both social and professional integration. This means Preceptors can assist the newly qualified nurses with integration into their nursing profession. Also, they can help to manage their performance by acting as a role model while providing guidance and feed back on their performance (Evans 2001).

Answer 2

Socio-occupational integration and development of clinical skills are AN important component of transition (Kramer cited by Evans 2001). A focus group collected data among nine newly qualified child health AGENCIES? from across central and east London. The aim of the focus group was to reveal the expectationS and concerns of the newly qualified nurses. The group of [] newly qualified nurses stated that interactions with experienceD nurses playED a significant role in social and professional integration. This means Preceptors can assist the newly qualified nurses to integrate into THE nursing profession and manage their performance through acting as [] role MODELS and providing guidance and FEEDBACK on their performance (Evans 2001).

Answer 3

components is plural in the first sentence. Among in sentence number two seems to make it flow unusually. In sentence two did you leave out something? "among nine newly qualified child health.." "From central to eastern London. Expectation is plural. Experience needs to be in past tense. /"into THE nursing profession." "manage their performance WHILE acting as a role MODEL." On the last sentence I think it would sound better if you let the last word be "feed back."

Answer 4

Yeah...thats what we all should be...role modules....

God protect us from the educated moron!...Please do not ever try to pass on what you know...you pass on ignorance!...

Answer 5

Can you please stop asking this question?