I need a conclusion for the Industrial Revolution?

Question

PLEASE HELP ME FINISH this is my last paragraph for my paper and i cant come up with a comclusion... PLEASE someone help... due 3/21/07

The Industrial Revolution made the lives of the people harder due to the poor living conditions, many injuries, child labor laws and long working hours. The poor living conditions was bad for the workers because of the clutter, pollution, it was cramped and crowed. There were many injuries from the harmful machines that the workers were made to work on. Child labor laws and the long working hours were outrageous; many children were not going to school because the children were forced to work because they are less to pay. In conclusion the Industrial Revolution .....

Answer 1

I cant write a conclusion without reading your paper, but i can tell you a very easy way to write one.

All you need to do is rewrite your introduction in reverse order. If you started your intro with a broad statement and ended it with your thesis statement, all you need to do for the conclusion is start by restating your thesis statement and then work in reverse of your intro ending your conclusion and paper with a broad statement.

I recommend four sentences for both your intro paragraph and your conclusion paragraph. They should say the same thing just in opposite order. It takes practice but once you do it a few times it works like a charm

Good Luck!

Answer 2

For a conclusion, basically write a sentence which sums up what you have already said, e.g. the Industrial Revolution radically changed the economy / the landscape /culture / way of life or whatever at the expense of the majority of people.

Answer 3

no no no
the industrial revolution did not make it harder
it made it a hell of a lot easier
yes there were downfalls
but look on the bright side, TECHNOLOGY!!
also advances in agricultural lead to population explosion
advances in medicine led to better survival rate
machines let more products be made cheaper and more people could buy the things they needed


if anything it made it much better