how is this scene from my upcoming movie?

Question

Henchman- Sir we have a problem
Ralph- What
H- Jack he won’t get out of the business
R- Did you offer him money
H- He won’t take it sir
R- Then by tomorrow morning I want their pictures on the front line news. They should be murdered
R- I want their deaths to be so disgusting that no person shall ever think of ever thinking of standing against me
R- Do you understand
H- Yes sir
Ralph’s picture freezes and the camera zooms in on a police training building
Police leader- You see this. Ralph he makes people fear him. No man has ever wrote a complaint against him and he trusts no one. That is why putting an undercover agent in his gang is highly improbable
Police Leader- Last one we put in his group ended up losing their fingers. Well men time is up and we shall meet tomorrow
Police leader walks over to his boss’ room
PL- Yes sir
B- You see are you sure that this operation will work.
PL- Yes sir
B- Do you remember what happened last time
PL- Yes I do
B- I am putting my hopes up on you don

Answer 1

Ummmm, it is interesting, but what is the point of the movie (plot)? What did they do to deserve to die? It seems to me that there is just a lot of graphic death.

Well, this is only a little portion of the movie so it is hard to be objective right now. Give me the rest and I Will tell you!!

Good Luck with the movie!