its really sad that i cant believe
nor trust
im so confused
i dont no whos tellin the truth
or who just tellin a f###in LIE
like someone i knew
i believed in everything he said
every word he said i believed in
i believed in everything he ever said,
it turned out 2 b all a f###in LIE!
i trusted him,
I believe in everything he said .
you dont know how much you hurt me,
you dont no how much u screwed it up.
wont believe ,
nor trust again,
how can u break my heart,
then say u still love me?
cried tears of blood for you,
do u know what i've been through
drowning in this ocean of tears & lies,
ur the one who caused my pain
u f###in lair,
how could u put me through so much pain,
Seeing our love turn to waste.
do you even realize how much pain im in because of YOU.........
I STILL LOVE YOU,
YOU F###IN B###H!!!
after what u put me through.
I slit my wrist because of you!!!!
now im bleeding here,
left to die.
2007-03-20 07:50:12 · 5 answers · asked by Vampire Goth 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
can u Help me make it more sense?
help think of a tragic ending??
can u fix the errors??
PLZ & THANK U
2007-03-20 07:52:36 · update #1
Blah, blah. Boring. Maudlin. Melodramatic. Self-pitying. Childish. Pointlessly self-destructive. Write it in your diary but don't inflict it on other people.
So your ex is a jerk? Not worth your drama. Move on.
2007-03-23 19:05:28 · answer #1 · answered by c_kayak_fun 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Its really sad
that I cant believe
Nor trust
I'm so confused
I don't no who's
Telling the truth
Or who just tellin a lie
Like someone i knew
I trusted in you
Every word he said i believed
but its not a relief
it turned out to be
all a lie
I trusted him,
I believe in him
He don't know how much he hurt me
He don't no how much he screwed up
He made me not able to believe
nor trust again
I was never enough
how could he break my heart
Then say he still loves me
How could he tear me apart
And think that I should trust him
I cried tears of blood for you
Do u know what I've been through
Drowning in this ocean of tears & lies
Ur the one who caused my demise
Your a lair,
how could u put me through so much pain
Seeing our love turn to waste
You watched me wilt away
And you don't even realize
how much pain im in
because of YOU.........
All because of you
after what u put me through.
I slit my wrist because of you
Now Im bleeding here,
left to die
And you wonder why
I started to cry...
2007-03-20 15:09:04 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
Try removing the swears.
2007-03-20 14:58:29 · answer #3 · answered by CrazyGirlinaMessedUpWorld 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
take out all the swearing and it will be much better!
2007-03-20 14:57:45 · answer #4 · answered by hopetohelpyou 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
maybe end it with getting up and shooting him-just for a song --not actually advising this--man, he hurt u
2007-03-20 15:00:33 · answer #5 · answered by luminous 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋