My second story at ten years of age?

Question

It’s about a boy named Evan who is 12 yrs old. He lives in New York with his mom and dad. His Uncle Zechariah (not Zachariah) is sick. He’s going to go care for him and on the way he gets ship wrecked. Would you like a passage of it? I don’t really need any tips but they are always welcome.

(1) What should he eat on the island?
(2) What should it be called? For now I have Lost Adventures

I am thinking of the Aztecs

Answer 1

1. Depends on where the island is. Some will have fruits, and usually there will be shellfish and regular swimming fish near an island. The main challenge will be will he be brave enough to eat things raw, or resorceful enough to figure out how to make fire.

2. Perhaps you could pick a particular challenge he has to face, and make a title about it. Other stories about survival have been called "Quest for Fire," and "Against the Sea".

Answer 2

e-mail me a passage at [e-mail], you could let him eat roasted meat from wild turkeys and find wild berries or make him creatful enough to make a spear and hunt for fish