Can you help me? Grammar....^^?

Question

-> Nazis had considered Jewish people as a threat to their nation, due to their high positions kept within the government. The phrase “epidemic carrier” has profound meaning that exposes how Jewish people had a huge influential impact on Germany. The hatred of German people towards Jewish people had been kept growing since the majority of Jewish people had occupied on their nation. Their wealth and political power have made them stronger and a huge threat to entire nation of Germany. After Hitler rose to a power, he had to look for a public enemy in order to keep his position and bring nation as one. The Jews were targeted and severely had been tormented by German people.

Answer 1

Nazis had considered Jewish people as a threat to their nation, due to their high positions kept within the government. The phrase “epidemic carrier” has profound meaning that exposes how Jewish people had a huge influential impact on Germany. The hatred of German people towards Jewish people had kept growing since the majority of Jewish people had occupied their nation. Their wealth and political power have made them stronger and a huge threat to the entire nation of Germany. After Hitler rose to power, he had to look for a public enemy in order to keep his position and bring the nation as one. The Jews were targeted, and had been severely tormented by the German people.

Made a few corrections...

Answer 2

Like above said - without agreeing on the content, here are my grammar corrections:

Nazis had considered Jewish people as a threat to their nation, due to high positions kept by Jews within the government. The phrase “epidemic carrier” has profound meaning that exposes how Jewish people had an enormously influential impact on Germany. The German hatred toward Jewish people had grown since Jewish people had begun to occupy Germany. The wealth and political power of the Jewish people has made them stronger and a threat to the entire nation of Germany. After Hitler rose to power, he had to look for a public enemy in order to keep his position and unify his nation. The Jews were targeted and were severely tormented by German people.

Answer 3

Without necessarily agreeing with one iota of what you have written, here is my stab at correcting the grammar :

Nazis had considered Jewish people as a threat to their nation, due to the high positions they kept within the government. The phrase “epidemic carrier” had profound meaning that exposed how Jewish people had a huge influence on Germany. The hatred of German people towards Jewish people had kept growing since many had occupied their nation. The wealth and political power of the Jewish people made them stronger and a huge threat to the entire nation of Germany. After Hitler rose to a power, he had to look for a public enemy in order to keep his position and bring the nation together. The Jews were targeted and severely tormented by the German people.

Answer 4

copy paste it on microsoft word then check your grammar... thats what i always do....hehehe

but i think nothings wrong with it....

Answer 5

ummm... i dont know but this is from ur pal casey, we can be friends, ok. seeya