do you like this poem?

Question

“We’re going to fast” I yell at you, before the world goes black
The car skids across the road; you hit the window. Smack
I feel your blood drip down my face; I know we are in trouble,
The SES is here, searching though the rubble
They whisk you away, with sirens and lights
I know you’re hurting bad, but you wont die without a fight
The sirens fade away, as the ambulance speeds down the street They try to stop me chasing you, but I won’t admit defeat
So many feelings are running through my mind They weave through my thoughts, twisting; entwined Your blood is still upon my face, dripping down my cheeks The crash site has gone silent; no-one dares to speak It’s only then I hear the news, you’ve left my life forever, But you’ll always be inside of me, your memory wont fade; never If only you could feel the pain I feel inside, The hurt and the anguish, I’ll never ever hide If only you could feel the tears trickle down my face, Weaving down my cheeks with so much dignity and grace

If only you could know how your loss has left me hollow If only you could know the emotions that do follow If only you could know the pain built up inside
On that terrible day it was, the day that you died My determination to get over this has made me a better person The pain inside hasn’t grown, however it hasn’t worsened Through many trials and tribulations I have never given in
I’ve used all my strength, all my might and willpower from within If only you could see how I’m trying to be strong
I’m trying to be brave, but without you I don’t belong If only you could see how I’m trying to get over this But this pain bottled up inside me, it will always exist
It almost been two years now, since you went away, Although I still miss you, the hurt has gone away I’ll never ever forget you, the way you made me laugh, I know part of me is missing- you’re my other half The hole you left inside me, it will always be there Nothing will ever fill it, only sadness and despair I

I know that awful day, like the back of my hand
Why you were taken away, I will never understand

Even though you’re not here now, my love for you is strong
This love will never leave me, because it is lifelong
With lots of help and perseverance, I know I’ve made it through
I’ll make one promise to you now- I’ll never stop loving you

Answer 1

yeah its a really good poem. i also write poetry so i would know. its sad though but very deep. you seem to have a passion for it. keep it up.

Answer 2

it is a very nice sentiment to be sure.

Answer 3

yea its good and scary. its really good

Answer 4

its good!

Answer 5

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