Never Ending Adventure- Title
Author- Champion~ Justin
Yr. 1/01/07
A planet with one choice… A thousand years ago, upon planet mars- a castle with a family of Martian specie separate from good version evil. Amphibian mortal survivor is a young husband and wife name Carrot with 3 children had a celebration, until the most terrible relative came with an appearance…
Joshewah: “I am sicken, but- a party is just knocking me to die”.
Isaac: “Come and stand for a moment, god of destruction. Or, you shall appear to die of faint” Laughing.
The Martian of darkness with a smile, had a plan to make the children mortal for his greed.
Joshewah: “Assistant 1 and 2 use this bottle and make the children vanish upon planet earth, forever”.
Within a minute the children had been kidnap and gone, and forever Justin, Benjamin, Samual grew in a huge planet… Far away from the palace.
…13 years in 1995…
Grandpa: “Little fellow boys and daughter, breakfast is in the kitchen”.
Children: “ YAY”!!!
Grandpa: “I have something for you boys birthday, after school”.
…Within the school, Justin had his eyes upon girls and a mystery- magical creature objects was climbing and moving around the students and city. Soon, a girl had a costume in a bag…
A magical teacher: “Welcome, students in a 1st class of gym”.
Justin is looking at the teacher, with blue skin and wings.
Prof. Eric Wood: “Students, this is mythology class. Within magic and charms”.
After school grandpa told Justin the truth about animals and trainers.
Samual: “All three of us boys, shall find these animals 1st from the hunters”.
Benjamin: “What is our, 1st task”?
Grandpa gives the boys a map for their birthday.
…January 3rd, the boys meet their rival enemy and opponent…
Huntess: “You three shall never defeat me”!!!
Within a walking street the boys vanish with a victory
Benjamin: “What moment should we all find the 1st nature creepy”?
Justin: It appears the usual weird animals with magic.
2007-03-19 13:46:33 · 2 answers · asked by Wilevam of SEEKER COUNCIL!?! 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Comics & Animation
plz change the names, th whole idea is good but can u try something more original like not martians or anything, maybe a totally different world dat's name haven't been used yet
a little weird and old fashioned in the beginning though
overall: 7/10 (10 being the best)
2007-03-19 14:07:06 · answer #1 · answered by 100%angelic 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Weird names and I don't exactly get the story. Very creative though.
2007-03-19 20:52:51 · answer #2 · answered by Etania 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋