It has to be an exaggeration poem like about love or deathy or something. i wanted to write about ego but nothing came to mind.. Help, plz!!!
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2007-03-19 13:16:57 · 8 answers · asked by sumdude 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
Burn my summer solstice
Smell the bomb
Stagger through dry liquid
We grow
Consume
Bruise
After Love
Thats one I wrote a few years ago it is an exaggeration on love and death...tell me what you think
2007-03-19 13:22:25 · answer #1 · answered by Colleen Q 2 · 0⤊ 2⤋
Ok here is a poem that I wrote about a girls ego.(i just wrote it for you because I know you wanted an ego one) Notice I never mention the word ego, till the end.
It was just too big,
All of the thoughts she had,
Where centered around her,
Making no one else mad.
She thought she was cool,
Because she had it all,
The boyfriend,
The straight A's,
Even the best batmitzvah ball.
But soon she thought too much of herself,
And forgot about her friends,
Making even her longest friendships,
come to a end.
She would sit at home and just say,
She wouldn't need anyone anymore,
But what she really meant,
Is she wanted a knock at the door.
She wanted to say she was sorry,
To make everything turn back to great,
But what she finally realized,
was that it was just too late.
The lesson this young girl seemed to learn here,
Was something very important to know.
It is something people need to be aware of,
And thats the size of their ego.
I hope you like it! I worked hard on it! Check for mistakes!
2007-03-19 20:28:42 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 2⤋
I write poetry but can you give me more details than about love or death? I'll be happy to write you a verse or two.
Just something off the top of my tired little mind (it's after midnight)
When I look for you in the pale moonlight
I am looking for the most wondrous sight
There is beauty there in your silhouette
Oh I praise the very day that we met.
When you walk with me with your hand in mine
And the air is full with the fragrant pine
I am happy as a man can get
Oh I praise the very day that we met.
Okay, I know, pretty lame but as a starter I hope it helps.
2007-03-19 20:34:33 · answer #3 · answered by elflaeda 7 · 1⤊ 2⤋
I rebel against the system
it's the devils kingdom
Death to the king
make him
The next terrorism victim
2007-03-19 22:02:16 · answer #4 · answered by Tha Most Shady 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
 She whispered "will it hurt me?"
"Of course not" answered he
"It's a very simple process,
You can rely on me."
She said "I'm very frightened,
I've not had this before.
My friend has had it five times
And said it can be sore."
It was growing rather painful
Tears formed in her eyes
It was hurting quite a bit now
It must have been the size.
"Calm yourself" he whispered
"His face filled with a grin
"Try and open wider
So I can get it in."
"It's coming now" he whispered
"I know" she cried in bliss
Feeling it deep within her now
She said "I am glad I'm having this."
And with a final effort
She gave a frightened shout
He gripped it in anguish
And quickly pulled it out.
She lay back quite contended
Sighed and gave a smile
She said "I'm glad I came now
You made it worth my while."
Now if you read this carefully
The dentist you will find
Is not what you imagined
It's just your dirty mind!!
2007-03-19 20:23:45 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 2⤋
I hate being blue
I hate all the fights too
but most of all
I hate missing you
Thought of it a long time ago when was going through a hard time.
2007-03-19 20:24:54 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 2⤋
No-if that's your assignment--do it yourself.
Anything else is cheating--and only losers cheat. Winners don't have to.
2007-03-19 20:20:52 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
no
2007-03-20 15:34:00 · answer #8 · answered by The King 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋