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Just a little poem to say,
How much I love You,
More than chocolate, more than suger,
So i hope you love me two
I really really love You,
More than word's can say,
And now that I love you too,
It'll be every night.. and day!
So do you like it? Rate it 1-15
2007-03-19 11:20:13 · 45 answers · asked by Lacadema (Role-player) 4 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
I'm only 11 dont be harsh!
2007-03-19 11:24:01 · update #1
Thank You all!
2007-03-19 11:26:41 · update #2
Stop being mean i tried my best!
2007-03-19 11:35:04 · update #3
the thought that you have even considered making a poem for your mum is fab...and i Will rate it 1000....
as your mum must be a great person and to have a good person like you to do this...and she had you you .....you are the best ....
2007-03-19 11:26:36 · answer #1 · answered by missnicedell 3 · 4⤊ 0⤋
15
2007-03-20 01:15:56 · answer #2 · answered by mnunez1709 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
10
2007-03-19 11:24:49 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 4⤊ 0⤋
Definite 15.
I used to write poems very easily before, once my passion for writing poems were replaced with other things...well you can say that I haven't written a single poem in years.
I remember once, I wrote this poem for mothers day. At sunday service, we had different things to do, in thanks to our mothers. I remember we danced hula, it was very beautiful. After that, I had the chance to read my poem and I was very thankful that my mom was there that day.
Lets just say that the way I wrote the poem, it was set to where I was having a bad dream and my mom was taken away from me. How I was left alone in this dark valley, towards the end it was made as if I cried myself awake. The best part, was when I opened my eyes, my mom was standing over me, seeing if I was alright. Then I ended the poem kind of like I was really happy to see her. Finishing with "I Love You Mom, Happy Mothers Day". I have to say, when I looked at all the mothers, they were all in tears. And when I sat down, my mom gave me a big hug. ...I just wish I knew where that poem was.
2007-03-19 17:33:50 · answer #4 · answered by cekret77 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
9
2007-03-19 11:23:03 · answer #5 · answered by -- 4 · 0⤊ 3⤋
I think it's great. 15 + 15
Worth more than all the money in the world to your mom no doubt. And ignore all those meanies griping at you to use spell check your mom will love it either way and it's cute and reflects your age at the time you wrote it.
Besides it looks like you can spell better than alot of adults on here.
2007-03-19 15:42:24 · answer #6 · answered by ? 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Awww... that was sooo cute Jonsie, I give it 15 15 15 15 all the way! You are such a gifted little poet, I think your mom will love it! :)
2007-03-19 12:01:35 · answer #7 · answered by Daughter of a Coma Guy 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Your mom is very fortunate to have a child as sweet you,
your poem is very nice, and sweet.
I give it a big "15"
and
I give you a "20" for being thoughtful of your mom
2007-03-19 12:45:31 · answer #8 · answered by kitti-kitti 5 · 2⤊ 0⤋
15 and even if you were 50 yrs old I would still give you a 15 b/c you wrote it it's your thoughts
and effort that were put into it .I am sure your mom will love it!
2007-03-19 16:46:25 · answer #9 · answered by selma b 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
9. a pair of missssssssssssssssspelllinngs, yet different than that, a first rate poem. i'm no longer likely into this way of emotion in my cutting-edge degree of existence, yet while i may be interior the temper for it, it may be gratifying.
2016-10-01 04:53:15 · answer #10 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋