ok! i want 2 write about a girl who's going 2 turn 13 and is the seventh grade! she's having problems at home with her parents and at school she dosen't really have that many friends. but then later on her and her friends have a HUGE problem and they learn that they should all work 2gether and help eachother and they all become best friends 4 life!!!!!!!!! is it good? i just got the idea! i have'nt started writing and i dont know what shoulld be the conflict! so pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaze tell meeeeeeeeeeee if this is a good start!!!!!!!! pleeeaze!!!!!
2007-03-19 10:28:01 · 10 answers · asked by Misz Drama Queen 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Other - Family & Relationships
yea this a really good idea and the conflict should be that the girl thats turning 13 should havea problem at home that her parents beat on her really really badly and she goes to skool and her friends and teachers start to see scars and marks on her. So she tells her friend and they all try and find a solution to this particular problem....I dont know something like that....lol
2007-03-19 10:34:03 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 2⤋
Well kid, you have a fantastic story here. I think I can help you with the conflict. The conflict of your story, is how all the friends disagree when the situation happens and how they all work together to figure out that together they can save themselves, but only if they work together. One friend knows electronics and that helps because of ?? your story, and another friend is disabled but is a math genious and he helps in some way, the week girl is usless until the end when she understands the crazy language they are all talking to a group of others that can help but there is a language barrier and the week girl figures it out because she is bilingual. Try this out for your story, I am sure you will be happy you have a great imagination, take care Heather
2007-03-19 10:36:14 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
sounds ok. ive seen alot of stories like it. try throwing in some magic or make believe worlds. also mabe add a little more background story to the girl. make it relatable but mystical and dreamy. like it could happen but maybe not. ya know? good luck!
2007-03-19 10:32:29 · answer #3 · answered by llamasrcool67 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋
you are able to no longer act huge black bags under your eyes! besides the fact that if the mummy replace into in on it - the father does no longer have been and he appeared merely as run down. you're all merely being mean and that boils right down to a minimum of one factor - the certainty that they are from a council sources!! Who cares - and in the event that they're profiting from it - what concerning the folk who're arranged to pay!!! they may be earning money from it to income their baby who would be scarred variety her adventure for the the remainder of her life! additionally speaking of bobbing up money the McCanns are those making the main and no-one is complaining of that!
2016-10-19 02:41:42 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds a lot like the sisterhood of the traveling pants.
2007-03-19 10:30:53 · answer #5 · answered by kMaz 5 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Good start. Dig deep into your brain for a conflict.
2007-03-19 11:33:55 · answer #6 · answered by gulfbreeze8 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Yes.
2007-03-19 10:41:31 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
This seems like a good story line, good luck.
2007-03-19 10:33:12 · answer #8 · answered by Randa 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
yes
2007-03-20 13:09:34 · answer #9 · answered by brunette_cheergirl 1 · 2⤊ 0⤋
yea, i guess i would wanna read it, im in 8th.
2007-03-19 10:30:17 · answer #10 · answered by moon_stars_fury 2 · 2⤊ 0⤋