i've just put some songs on a purevolume page, and i would like your opinion on the songs that i've written. Any advice/criticism?
http://www.purevolume.com/littlebluelines
2007-03-19 03:42:49 · 3 answers · asked by fresh_prince_of_bel_fast 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music
not good dude
2007-03-19 03:49:10 · answer #1 · answered by bassist_of_light 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The first two are in the same key (A) and start with the same cadence of 1 to m2 and the third goes from B to a suspended B which is slightly more interesting but still similar. I would say learn some different rhythms and start re-tuning the guitar, you know, drop-D, drop-G, CGCGCd, CGCGCe, etc to expand your pallet. I have nothing against the songs but it's not my cup of tea. You look like me.
2007-03-19 10:56:40 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
they're pretty good. your voice could use some tuning, but other than that it's ok.
2007-03-19 10:47:08 · answer #3 · answered by chris 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋