Is this a good yugioh deck? give tips also?

Question

monsters:
jinzo
2x cyber dragon
mobius
thestalos
granmarg
2x old vindictive
3x peten the dark clown
ninja grandmaster sasuke
spirit reaper
d.d warrior lady
command knight
amazoness chain master
mataza the zapper
exiled force
sangan
marauding captain
spells:
different dimension capsule
hammer shot
nobleman of crossout
heavy storm
creature swap
mage power
rush recklessly
lightning vortex
smashing ground
enemy controller
snatch steal
riryoku
traps:
3x sakuretsu armor
spell shield type-8
magic cylinder
compulsory evacuation device
trap jammer

I forgot to add bottomless trap hole

Answer 1

I like to say I'd duel a deck before a I make a judgment, but remember Jinzo is a double edged sword you won't be able to use traps either.

Answer 2

alright, heres what your pluses are, you have good equipts and a pretty set deck, you have mainly warriors and you have alot of good crap,
here are the minuses, the fact that you have so many warriors, but not "the a. forces" leaves you out on some serious attack power, and you have cards like petin the dark clown, hes good but you should just have a plain warrior deck, you can get rid of them for 2 more marauding captins and a goblin attack force, i would recommend getting mroe command knights on the feild, if you only have 2 command knights on the feild you cant be attacked, also, if you have 2 marauding captains on the field then your safe as well
email me andi'll tell you the rest, you have a good deck, but theres room for improvement

ps- mabey i'll email you MY warrior deck recipe

another ps- the game is not about destroying monsters, a penguen soldier will benifit more ex. they have 2 or mabey 1 monster on the feild, they attack it, and you return there monsters to their hand, then on your turn, you can summon marauding captain, then use his effect to get you goblin attack force, and BAM, you just did 3500LP, and plus, if his monsters are in the graveyard, he can he can use call of the haunted, or premeture burial, but if it's in his hand, he might have to sacrifice monsters to get it back in the field

Answer 3

7 out of 10 man thats a alright deck but the power increasers

Answer 4

yes, your deck is solid. based on the decks you must face i would suspect it wins most of the time..untill your opponents sides in decrees, pulling the rug, and creatures with trample ability!! but your deck (warrior, monarch control) is very good!! but it could use some minor upgrades, who doenst like upgrades? lol one mirror force would be nice!!

Answer 5

ok deck

tip:have 2/3 of your deck trap and spells

Answer 6

Very good but try adding a few "Trap holes"

Answer 7

it sounds like a good deck but it depens on your opponets deck

Answer 8

you dont have a slifer the sky dragon or obelisk the tomentor? but this pretty good cards i have to say.

Answer 9

fairly good could use some balencing