I'm writing an essay about what I like about summer. and I have like the food, the different events, and going on vacation. Have any ideas to contribute to that?? I'm not sure- just tell me what u like about summer.
2007-03-18 14:06:38 · 6 answers · asked by lostluver14 2 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
It would be a lot better to expand on what you already have. Why do you like ______? Do you have any especially touching/funny/important memories about _____? Why does ______ matter more to you than it does to other people? Using a lot of description is great for these kinds of essays, and it definitely pads the word count. Also, standard essay advice: Show, don't tell. Don't say "I really like all the food my family makes in the summer", say, "The multi-colored condiments, the sound of tongs clacking, the sudden whoosh of the gas grill as it's lit, each separate kernal of corn marinading in the butter dripping down onto the plate: This is summer".
2007-03-18 14:16:09 · answer #1 · answered by orlalicious 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
The friends
The weather
The feeling of the shade
A trip in a car with wind blowing at your face
Buying clothes
SHOPPING, SHOPPING, and MORE SHOPPING
Living Life and Lovin' it
GOOD LUCK ON YOUR ESSAY- SLEEPING IN
LOL!
2007-03-18 21:16:01 · answer #2 · answered by Lefty 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
1.swimming
2.picnics
3.friends
3.no school
4.warm weather
5.sleeping in
6.going to bed late
7.watching movies ALL day
8.chating with friends
9. IMing people
10.waterparks
2007-03-18 21:12:50 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
getting wet and being in vacations out of school!
2007-03-18 21:10:06 · answer #4 · answered by ~♥XoXoXoXo♥~ 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
i like working and making money, and not going to school.plus all of my friends come back from school and we get to hang out like old times. and girls wear their skimpy outfits more.
2007-03-18 21:11:57 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
all water sports !
2007-03-18 21:09:23 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋