Rate my deck and help change it slightly?

Question

Cards: 40
Format: Advance

Monster: 21
3x Old Vindictive Magician
3x Man-Eater Bug
1x Gravekeeper’s Guard
1x Mask of Darkness
1x Exiled Forces
1x Masked Sorcerer
2x Apprentice Magician
1x Spell Canceller
1x Mobius the Frost Monarch
1x Dream Clown
1x Night Assailant
1x Sangan
1x Jinzo
1x Swarm of Scarabs
1x Swarm of Locusts
1x Mystic Swordsman lvl 2

Spells: 11
2x Smashing Ground
1x Snatch Steal
1x Swords of Revealing Light
1x Nobleman of Crossout
1x Book of Moon
1x Heavy Storm
1x Heart of Clear Water
1x Premature Burial
1x Mystical Space Typhoon
1x Creature Swap

Traps: 8
2x Sakuretsu Armor
1x Gravity Bind
1x Compulsory Evacuation Device
2x Trap Hole
1x Dust Tornado
1x Call of the Haunted

Strategy: Try to beat my opponent down with my weak monsters like Man Eater Bug and Old Vindictive Magician while killing and destroying anything they try to counter with. Ex: If my opponent attacks, Sakeretsu. If opponent sets a monster, flip my face down Man-Eater or Vindictive to kill it. It is actually quite consistant. Summon Jinzo, Mobius or Spell Canceller to to end or lockdown the game. Heart of Clear Water is here to make my Dream Clown harder to kill and gets its effect far more often or put it on Mystic Swordmans lvl 2 for no facedowns, or mask Sorercor for more draws.

Answer 1

man nice deck, i used a deck pretty much exactly like your and it worked perfect. i used 3 newdorias, they basically have the same effect with the added power, and i recomned not using trap hole or compulry add bottomless trap holes instead. if u want defence nothing beats sprit reaper and who make a deck without our froggy buddy!(treeborn frog). but yea u got a really nice deck.

have fun and happy duelling =)

Answer 2

3x Man-Eater Bug
3x Old Vindictive Magician
1x Jinzo
1x Mobius the Frost Monarch

thoes are the only cards you have that are worth it but you need "some" new cards.

Answer 3

Man, you made me run upstairs and grab me own deck for this one. I can give you some strategies I employ in my own duels.

I picked this up from my neighbor.

Requirements: Goblin King. Monster card
Raregold armor. spell card
DNA surgery. trap card

now play your goblin king, and equip him w/ raregold armor. now your opponents must attack him. his attk is zero, but when you use dna surgery, you make all monsters on your side of the field fiends. gobby's effect allows his attk to rise to 8000. but you're not done yet. his effect also says they must attk him if there are other fiends on your side of the field, and thanks to DNA surgery, there are!!! you cannot be attacked, unless your opponent uses a despell, dark hole, etc. but you can kill him off easily if you can delay him a bit

i also use fusions, occasionally that is, and i happen to own a blue eyes ultimate in my deck. plus the 3 blu eyes, so fusions can be a powerful thing, considering ultimate's attk is 4500.

i also feature toon monsters in my deck. they are very useful as well. ill include a contents of my deck below.
nah, nvm. but i have many powerful monsters in my deck, including my jinzo, whom i love very much. your deck sounds like a fun challenge. i hope we both have the privilege of dueling each other someday!!

Answer 4

Ummm, I'd say a couple of cans of Raid and a .50 cal mini-gun ought to clear up your problem.

Answer 5

I've seen better, like mine, u have toomany useless traps and spells

Answer 6

GET RID OF ALL THE WEAK MONSTERS AND GET STRONGER ONES