can someone please help me with wording? thanks?

Question

so here i am trying to write the fact that there is a web service for you to go on to so you can receive a truth or dare at an instant when you have you're friends round etc and you are surfing the net so this is what i have so far:
Wherever you are, whatever you’re doing, at home or out, '*name of company* will make sure you are entertained with our fun web service. Simply text DARE,KISS or TRUTH to 85558 and receive a dare, kiss or truth to enjoy on the go. So go on, what you waiting for? Click on and let the fun begin!
should it be 'surf on'?
its all about having fun when you are with your friends or you have them round using this web service but you can access web service on mobile phones aswell so dunno. any ideas? thanks.

sorry i dint mean for it to say 'simply TEXT'! Simply *dont know what word should go here*. rememer its web, internet so 'simply visit our website at
www.blah blah blah.com? what do you think?

Answer 1

Huh? This is very confusing...

OK, let's try to figure this out -

Wherever you are, whatever you’re doing, at home or out, '*name of company* will make sure you are entertained with our fun web service. Simply visit truthdareorkiss.com to receive a dare, kiss or truth to enjoy on the go. So go on, what you waiting for? Click on and let the fun begin!

This doesn't really work for a couple of reasons:
1) Why would you impulsively need a truth or dare? You'd only visit this site if you were playing the game and couldn't think of one yourself. It is definitely not a fun game to play by yourself.
2) You can't simply use the service anywhere or anytime - you need some form of Internet connection.

I would suggest catering it to the correct audience - people who are either playing the game already and need a topic or people who are together & don't know what fun thing to do - and get rid of the "wherever you are" aspect as it is not necessarily true.

One of the funniest trends I've seen is that advertisers are now often using the word "FINALLY" as if you've been waiting for this all your life, then (on purpose) don't give you much information on what is at a website.

How about "Finally! A web serve that handles all your fun-needs. Get your friends together and visit truthdareorkiss.com and see what everyone is talking about!"