Is this really a poem or not??BE honest plssss....
RADICALS from the word "Radix"
to mean the word "Root"
If "n" is a positive integer n,
"a" will be a Real number.
For which a 1/n is defined
Then, the expression n√a
will be called RADICAL;
and the n root a n√a of equals a 1/n.
Mathematically, an n root of a number,
"a" is a number b, such that b =a
n root of a real number "a"
Refers to the n root of a real number.
2007-03-18 01:26:38 · 13 answers · asked by hypershock_05 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities
Nope. No more than it was when you posted the same question earlier. So I'll post the same answer:
No. Dividing text into three four line stanzas doesn't make it poetry. It doesn't scan, there is no rhythm, there are no internal or end rhymes. There are no metaphors. There is a little alliteration but only by coincidence instead of intention. It has no meaning beyond its mathematical one.
2007-03-18 01:54:57 · answer #1 · answered by krak 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I gather that your droplets are rain drops and your "fool" does not notice them or the rainbow. OK, hardly profound but it is ok. I like the bare-footed, half-witted juxtaposition. Get rid of the ellipses (...); they mark you as a tyro. Drop the commas in "It is, to the fool," Suggest a break between waiting and the droplets. Likewise, I might change from silver and fresh to a different two modifiers to change the mood a little. Think about it. Just a suggestion. The dagger, the heart, the blood and the pain -- makes that plural then so your "it is, to the fool" rather a tough construction. I know, you want it to be parallel. "Are to the fool" is better grammar.
2016-03-29 04:41:59 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I actually find this to be an interesting poem. YES, I said POEM. It is funky. Trippy.
Anddd, it is much more interesting than the crap most amateurs consider poetry.
the following is CRAP:
"wahh my boyfriend broke up with me.
i love him so so much you see.
but he doesn't love me anymore.
i dont know why he walked out the door."
OR
"the world doesn't understand me
its always dark and never light
i don't know who they want me to be
who am i and why is it night?"
2007-03-20 09:58:26 · answer #3 · answered by toxicPoison 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Honestly, I don't think it's a poem. Poems don't have to rhyme, but this seems to be just definitions and instructions... written in poetic style.
Sorry... you wanted us to be honest!
2007-03-18 01:35:12 · answer #4 · answered by sscodenameisprinceton 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Umm it sounds more like the explanation of a mathematical equation to me.
2007-03-18 01:35:31 · answer #5 · answered by Bethe W 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Poems do not have to rhyme as some people think, however this is stil not a peom - Sorry!
2007-03-18 04:57:33 · answer #6 · answered by mindy 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Yes if the writer has some meanings in it, not just an information statements.
2007-03-18 01:42:55 · answer #7 · answered by Se2 1 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It doesn't sound like a poem because it doesn't have the elements a poem is supposed to have, like rhyme, form, meter and sound.
2007-03-18 01:41:17 · answer #8 · answered by don'twantthistoend 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
if poetry's all truth & beauty, this's all truth but less beauty.
try reading it aloud. . . . . sounds like one's eating dry leaves or an elephant walking on on a heap of crackling eggs!!!!
2007-03-18 03:05:34 · answer #9 · answered by ari-pup 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
it really does not sound like a poem coz it has no rhyme scheme
2007-03-18 01:38:11 · answer #10 · answered by sann 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋