My question is if anyone knows of a website or anything with good and useful examples of the basic 5-6 paragraph critique? I've tried looking but i cant find any decent. I need help at looking at how other ppl word their critique without using "i" and stating their opinion at the same time.
I've never had this much trouble with writing before but my college teacher makes english sound like science lol.
Please Help.
2007-03-16 18:57:29 · 4 answers · asked by Sabrina 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
Write in the third person
http://www.democraticunderground.com/articles/04/03/11_torture.html
is an excellent critique with third person narrative. Very clear example of what your teacher is looking for. Notice how the writer never says I, but still clearly shows his opinion.
Please ignore the actual topic and the political slant, as that is not what I mean to show you. Rather notice how the author has organized his thoughts and opinion and supported it using direct references from the text.
Sorry about the political overtone, it is just a good example of third person critique.
2007-03-16 19:04:52 · answer #1 · answered by Chali 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
as long because it grow to be nicely written, i actually would not be conscious till I occurred to look back on the "concerning to the author". yet whilst all of it began to get a number of of media interest, i think of it may get some human beings involved and others disinterested. i in my view could be skeptic approximately analyzing a e book written by employing somebody so youthful, for the reason that few human beings of that age are worth of being printed. whether, if I examine the define on heard stable comments from those with comparable e book tastes then I meant i could supply it a attempt. If it grow to be everywhere close to as stable as Harry Potter, i could be bowing right down to that distinctive 13 3 hundred and sixty 5 days old. i comprehend I surely wasn't even on the edge of being a stable author at that age.
2016-10-01 01:43:48 · answer #2 · answered by schenecker 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You don't have the problem, your professor does. A critique is based by definition on your opinion. Therefore it is inane to expect an honest critique from anybody except the critiquer. Again by definitio0n, your (The "I") opinion.
2007-03-24 17:33:03 · answer #3 · answered by Gussage P Ussage 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
1. click on WRITERSCAFE.ORG.
2. WRITERS' DIRECT
3. ON LINE WRITING COURSE
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2007-03-16 19:16:15 · answer #4 · answered by wilma m 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋