A far off memory is like a scatted dream, a scatted dream thats like a far off memory, I wont to line the peaces up, yours and mine. I feel as those the whole world is not real as who know nothing can’t understand nothing and in return the world is nothing at all, it’s an empty shell just waiting to rust into nothing more then dust flowing into the air. but in the end i still cry because the worl's unfair.
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Ariel (me)
2007-03-16 15:22:55 · 6 answers · asked by ? 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Other - Entertainment
I like it...it's good. But you need to work on a little bit. Other then that its good.
I also write poems...so if you wanna write one together sometime contact me.
2007-03-16 15:29:48 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
This is not your poem! I'm a huge Kingdom Hearts fan (video game) so I would recognize it.
2007-03-16 16:49:31 · answer #2 · answered by hpotter4ever2000 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
once you put it lines and fix some of the spelling it will be great!
2007-03-16 15:44:13 · answer #3 · answered by Fire Dance 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
nice
2007-03-16 15:35:30 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Bravo!Bravo! That was great. I loved it.
2007-03-16 15:30:51 · answer #5 · answered by OptimusFan1 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
"the world's unfair.......", i like that phrase.....
nice poem, i like it... : )
2007-03-16 15:35:24 · answer #6 · answered by bee_ 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋