i need help writing a song.?

Question

ok, i need help thinking of a love song...i know what to say, but im not sure how to make it rhyme, im having a little trouble with a song title, and a choruse..just please help....im asking for another chance with a girl, we went out once, and it wasnt for long, but i really love her, ...help please

Answer 1

You can start by creating notes of fancy word that rhyme. Like when it ended with love, perhaps for the next part you can use crave,gave,soft, or even stupid word like cave.
Always bring a recorder wherever you go because sometime ideas come out at strange places.
About chorus,you can start by playing chord combination that consist of c,d,g,and a. Almost all song in the world revolve aroung them.
Chorus need to be stronger than the verse. You should consider making a wider range of the melody during chorus. For example if you use only 1 octave for the verse....try using 2 octave for the chorus.

Answer 2

Songs don't always have to rhyme...But what I do is write out everything Iwant to say, then go back making small adjustments that make it rhyme...That way, the message is more important than the sound.

Answer 3

Lyrics don't really matter if the song is good. They don't have to rhyme neither, that's not the point of poetry. Express how you feel in your own manner. If the girl doesn't accept then forget about her. There are plenty of other girls out there who will dig it.

Answer 4

It really is up to you want you want to say I have some poetry I write , friends of mine have turned some of it into music before with success. if youd like help or to borrow something of mine im happy to help just send me a message . but yeah my advice would be to start with a poem. it doesnt have to rhyme . here is an example ..... I once heard a man say is life for living ? or living for us to die ?. Yeah thats the one. Is it not for loving and loving for goodbyes . He says ;theres always tommorow but like today it never comes . so ill sit here and cry in my beer and wish to god that you were with me here.

Answer 5

Oh I had me a girl
and our love was so true
But she got tired of me
asking questions on Yahoo!

So she packed up her stuff
and she hopped on a bus
Leaving me here
To write songs about us

But I can't even do that
Because I can't make a rhyme
And I can't write a melody
And I can't even keep time.

So I sit in my room
Watching my porns
And wait for an answer
From good ol' hookem_hornz.



Good luck... hope you make a million bucks off it.

Answer 6

Ive seen you standing There
I can not help it I have to stare
Your eyes make me smile
We haven't been seeing each other for a while

Why did you have to leave
aren't you th one who took hold of my sleeve?
It made me realize
That I just had to look into your eyes

Please just give me a second chance
You haven't really gotten a glance
Of my real self
I had to make lies, i just couldn't help

You seemed so perfect

That's all i can think of, it might not be that great but i don't usually write music, I usually just play it.

Answer 7

i might be able to help. i want to be a song writer when i grow up so just contact me if you like at [e-mail]...thats my email. write the first line of the song and ill give you some pointers or make a couple lines of the song lol.

Answer 8

E-mail me with the whole situation and I'll help you as much as possible. Lilblue222003@yahoocom I will do everything i possibly can to help you write a song. Good luck

Answer 9

if you want you can email me, sorry im gonna need a little more info, why did it end? You want a second chance but why are you not together now? please email me i really wanna help, and you can share with me the style that you are singing the song in, accoustic, rock, coutry what tempo, etc thanks! Seriously email me and i will help :)

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Answer 10

sure I'll help you, i write a lot of lyrics and poems. email me on [e-mail] and show me what you got so far =)!