Can you make some grammar or spelling check? please? Thanks?

Question

For the purpose of revealing the cause of the stress among newly qualified nurses data were collected through using a semi structured interview with 18 newly qualified nurse. The summary of the data collection indicated to four major categories such as the reality of practice, learning the system, developing clinical judgement, and developing professional relationship.

Answer 1

It looks quite good to me...even though I would find a way not to repeat "newly qualified nurses" in the first sentence...
Plus there is a "to" too many...

Answer 2

Here you go:


For the purpose of revealing the cause of stress among newly qualified nurses, data were collected through a semi-structured interview with eighteen newly qualified nurses. The summary of the data collection indicated four major categories: The reality of practice, learning the system, developing clinical judgement, and developing professional relationships.

Answer 3

For the purpose of revealing the cause of stress amongst newly qualified nurses, data was collected using semi-structured interviews with 18 newly qualified nurses. The summary of the data indicated 4 major categories, such as the reality of practice, learning the system, developing clinical judgment and developing professional relationships.

Answer 4

For the purpose of revealing the cause of the stress among newly qualified nurses, data was collected through using a semi structured interview with 18 newly qualified nurses. The summary of the data collection indicated to four major categories, such as the reality of practice, learning the system, developing clinical judgment, and developing professional relationship.

Make the corrected changes and you have a good paragraph.

Answer 5

For the purpose of revealing the cause of stress among newly qualified nurses, data were collected using a semi-structured interview with 18 newly qualified nurses. The summary of the data collected indicated four major categories: reality of practice, learning the system, developing clinical judgement, and developing professional relationship.

Answer 6

For the purpose of revealing the cause of stress among newly qualified nurses, data was collected using a semi-structured interview with 18 newly qualified nurses. The summary of the data revealed four major categories of stress, such as the reality of the practice, learning the system, developing clinical judgment, and developing professional relationships.

Answer 7

A study was conducted by [...] in order to reveal the cause of stress among newly qualified nurses. Data was collected by means of a semi structured(what? explain) interview with 18 newly qualified nurses (or you can use the term RN). The studies revealed four major areas which may trigger the stress such as

1)the reality of practice, (be more specific)
2)learning the system, (be more specific)
3)developing clinical judgement,
4)and developing professional relationship.

explain each one

Answer 8

To reveal the causes of stress among newly qualified nurses, data was collected using a semi-structured interview with 18 newly qualified nurses. The data summary indicated 4 major categories; reality of practice, learning the system, developing clinical judgement, and developing professional relationships.
NOTE: I also "de-fogged it". There is no reason to say, "for the purpose" when "to" will suffice. Shorter sentences = clearer communication.

Answer 9

For the purpose of revealing the cause of stress among newly qualified nurses, data was collected through a semi-structured interview with 18 newly qualified nurses. The summary of the data collection indicated four major categories: the reality of practice, learning the system, developing clinical judgment and developing professional relationships.

Answer 10

For the purpose of revealing the cause of stress among newly qualified nurses, data was collated using Semi-structured interviews with 18 newly qualified nurses. The summary of the findings indicated that there were four major categories; the reality of practice, learning the system, developing clinical judgement and developing professional relationships.

Answer 11

For the purpose of revealing the cause of stress among newly qualified nurses, data were collected using a semi-structured interview with 18 newly qualified nurses.
The summary of the data collected indicated four major categories such as the reality of practice, learning the system, developing clinical judgement, and developing professional relationships.

Good luck.