Your words are as powerful as fire
You make me cry myself to sleep each night,
You insult me and call me a liar
How you make me wish I could end this fight,
You assure me that you are in control,
I remember when I was young,
Determined to not let anyone run my life,
How far I have strayed from my beliefs for you,
Yet you have been everything but true,
What did I ever see in you?
You beat me ‘till I am black and blue,
You made me scared to breathe,
I am breaking free.
I am leaving you,
This is true,
You are no good for me,
I was blinded but now I see.
I am no longer afraid of you,
I have the Lord on my side,
You will no longer make me black and blue,
The storm is over and the ocean’s tide,
Is over, it is all over
I just wrote it.
Please be honest, but remember you can be honest without being rude.
God Bless
2007-03-15 17:28:33 · 13 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
You might be shocked but I am not in an abusive relationship, I just know how those women feel who are in that type of relationship. I am only 16, so I haven't ever even been in a relationship
2007-03-15 17:33:47 · update #1
I've been in abusive relationships in the past... but it can be hard to stand up for yourself when you're looking down the barrel of a gun.
It reminds me a bit of a Neglected Sheep song called "Time." I doubt the band's still around, but the MP3 used to be available for (legal) download.
2007-03-15 17:32:45 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow! I sit here and am wowed (for lack of a better word) by what you wrote. I just wish I could have said those things to my ex husband. I put up with his abuse for 8 years.
That is an excellent poem!!
2007-03-16 00:47:06 · answer #2 · answered by Tigger 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It is very good and pertinent to a lot of people. You should publish it and touch some souls!
2007-03-16 01:17:50 · answer #3 · answered by whrldpz 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I hope you do succeed in your quest. Nobody deserves to be abused. Thought provoking.
2007-03-16 00:32:12 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I honestly do not like it. Sorry. But hey, art is personal and this is obviously good therapy for you so....good for you.
2007-03-16 00:33:11 · answer #5 · answered by Meg D 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is very good
2007-03-16 00:38:37 · answer #6 · answered by stillbay 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'm glad it's over
2007-03-16 00:33:14 · answer #7 · answered by BOOM 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
That is nice! But you shouldn't be posting it, it could easily be stolen!!!
2007-03-16 00:30:52 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
It's pretty good.
2007-03-16 00:33:20 · answer #9 · answered by Tellin' U Da Truth! 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
hey its cool..try to change the last line!:-)
2007-03-16 00:32:19 · answer #10 · answered by MagicalPixie 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋