all i eva wanted was my family proud of me...but before i knew it all dese people started crowden me,i wish dese people would get outta my face cause every were i go i feel like im bein chased...people sayin crap and they dont even know me all ofa sudden they think dat they can control ME?i wish dey would stop and leave me alone fo awhile before it gets worse and i crack like a tile!i write raps ta get dis crap outta my head carven up paper lead afta lead...man,dont i wish it would stop im getting so exausted to where i could drop.....and dang dont i wish i had rest im gettin really tired and im drowneded wit stress,dang who knew that life put up such hard offa test?well...it aint matta cause no one could top no matta what u say aint no one could stop me!...see no preesure could bring me down cause no matta what happens ill stand my ground! thats tha rap it aint my favorite i dont know if i should use it in my career!
2007-03-15 16:29:23 · 6 answers · asked by wamzy 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
Don't listen to that one dude, I really think thats great, no not great, super-terrific-exciting-amazing-wonderful-and so forth!! at least a LOT better than this other one I read, that other one TOTALLY made no sense whatsoever, and it really didn't have a point, on offense to them, even though they won't be able to tell if it's them. I really understood yours, and it makes sense to my used to be, mine, and other people's struggles in school, and I'm sure taht if you could make up that good of a rap, you could make up a great song to go with it! You really have something good going, and I really want to know what it's like when it's done, is there someway you could give it to me or somehing? or do you not want peopel knowing your e-mail, I understand if you don't, but if not, then i would love to see the rest!!!
*~~PeNgUiN~~*
2007-03-15 16:43:17 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I dont concepts rap as long because it doesnt communicate approximately killing or homicide or something undesirable. you comprehend what track I realy like? Jibbs, does your chain carry low. it is a lovable one and that i admire the track :)
2016-10-02 05:06:05 · answer #2 · answered by roser 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
thats cool that poeple can rap .rap is another way of writing poetry but in a beat.
2007-03-15 16:34:09 · answer #3 · answered by Michelly4you 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
its good but needs some improvement....make it sound more interesting if you can!!
2007-03-15 16:34:18 · answer #4 · answered by Chocogal 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
garbage yo you don't have to worry bout gay z jackin that cus it sucks
2007-03-15 16:34:25 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
It's great.
2007-03-15 16:31:52 · answer #6 · answered by Joseph 2 · 1⤊ 1⤋