HELP!!!! Introduction for my essay?

Question

I already have a thesis statement the last sentence. I need other sentence for my introduction

Here my introduction:

Society plays a major role that impact on the views of young adults toward their lives. (other sentence)Males and females may obtain similar goals of love, money, and career, but their importance and approach to gaining those goals are differently.

PLEASE HELP ME !!!!!!!!!!!!


THANKS

Answer 1

You introduction need to express what points you will be exploring a why - Society plays and major role that influences the views of young adults towards their lives. One of the key impacts in the societal influences on the perceptions that men and women have in determining their roles in society. This paper will be exploring the why men and women differ in their approaches and level of importance to love, money and careers.

Answer 2

Try this:

Society plays a major role which impacts the views of young adults toward their lives. (Societal norms help to impact career goals in young adults by choosing either traditional or non-traditional careers.)Males and females may obtain similar goals of love, money, and career, but their importance and approach to gaining those goals are different.

Answer 3

Although teachers and parents do play a much more important role society still wins because of all the peer pressure that society causes young adults to be faced with.

Answer 4

Something like Upbringing, and societal ethics play big parts in the views and values taught to be important.

Answer 5

I would make mention of something about how it's common for society to view men and women differently in business, which would lead to their different styles of achievement.

Answer 6

Using yahoo answers for your essay introduction is cheating. You are asking someone to write it for you and that is plagerism. Cheating is not the way to a degree