What was it like that day
When terrorism was all they could say?
What was it like when the towers fell
Could it have all meant well?
We were attacked by surprise that day,
in the most horrible, horrible way.
People died in the fires they made.
A lot of coffins were laid
in the ground six feet under.
Was it fate? I wonder.
What will happen to the men
who did this so they could win?
Why was it a must
to turn those towers to dust?
Now it is called ground Zero,
but who is the real hero?
The ones who helped when the first plane hit,
or the ones dying in the Afgan pit?
When those towers fell was all lost?
What did all this cost?
Why did this happen to us?
Did we get on the wrong bus?
And hurt when help was in need
Did we not hear the needy pleed?
America has changed from good to bad,
And this is all very sad.
America has changed like it or not,
We have grown into a bigger dot.
We are a little boy,
And the world has become our toy.
Well I want to ask you one more thing
Have you lost that first initial pang,
Of guilt and lost
Or are those feelings tossed?
I remember those towers well
Like it is a really good spell.
But I want to know
What was it like that day,
When terrorism was all they could say?
2007-03-15 08:47:34 · 18 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
That poem is amazing. you should really be a poet. its soo deep. You should be soo proud ov ya self
2007-03-15 08:51:30 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
In my opinion I don't like rhyming poems. For some reason the rhyming aspect seems to lighten the mood, and the 9/11 terrorist attacks were very deep and dramatic. I think their should be more symbolism of the horrible things that happened, and not just lines thrown in there ti make the poem rhyme.
2007-03-15 15:54:32 · answer #2 · answered by Andrew D 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Excellent.
2007-03-15 15:50:24 · answer #3 · answered by amberlynne_2007 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
You are very creative and I liked it a lot.
Remember this;
**Life is a journey ....... NOT a guided tour.
So don't miss the ride and have a great time going around, you don't get a second shot at it. **
2007-03-15 16:04:47 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Be careful with your writing on here. Someone may steal it and publish it. It's very good.
2007-03-15 15:57:43 · answer #5 · answered by Baw 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
This is a very nice poem, that you have written i like
2007-03-15 15:50:53 · answer #6 · answered by lefteye w 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it's very good.
2007-03-15 15:51:08 · answer #7 · answered by ???? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2007-03-15 15:50:34 · answer #8 · answered by shiek yerbouti 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2007-03-15 15:56:46 · answer #9 · answered by I Pity Da Fool 3 · 2⤊ 0⤋
thats kool i wish i had at least a little bit of talent........im a complete blonde with brown hair!!!!!! lol well keep writin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2007-03-15 15:51:02 · answer #10 · answered by Live.To.Love. 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋