HELP!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I need a thesis statement for my essay!!!!!!!?

Question

I need to write a comparison and contrast essay between females and males. I want to write how they desire love, money, and a great careers for their lifes, but they have different view on love, money, and careers.

I create a intro. but i don't think is good. here my intro.:

Society has change the ways young adults view the most important factors of life. The most important factors of life are love, money, and careers. Both females and males desire to encounter love, money, and great career, but they have different views on love, money, and careers.


Please HELP ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks

Answer 1

It sounds to redundant, you may want to say, Men and Women are both driven by similar motivations but their importance and approach to gaining those goals differ.

Answer 2

1.
Love/Female - Feminen Love is more or less mostly like Male Love but 1 thing is diffrent most all women do not generally ever "love" a man, or woman in other cases, at the first sight (but they think they do).

Love/Male - Men often look to the beauty and abilities of a woman to determine their feelings for them and most often then not make the mistake of thinking they like the woman but not actually liking/loving her.

2.
Female/Money - The Female for Finances she generally loves to spend the money all at one time and not save it for the bigger and better things and plan it out more unless they happen to want something they can afford very badly.

Male/Money - The Male Often saves up his money to buy things/gifts for his mate and if not that then something for himself or a relative, like most women do too, we usually set goals for our money to try and buy the thing we have wanted for so long even if we cant buy it quite yet.

3.
Female/Career - The Ideal Career choice for a female is one that does not involve heavy lifting large quantity of men around or something of great harm or something they may take as harm to them or others they care about.

Male/Career - The Male Ideal Career Choice is most of the time dependant on the amount of money the man is getting for his job wether it is a job that involves being a worker at a salon to fixing toilets as long they get paid good they dont care.

I Hope that answers you're questions or atleast gives you a main idea of what you can write now and if not please refer to my yahoo email - [e-mail] Thanks.

Answer 3

The path by which males and females obtain the life goals of love, careers and money are directly related to societal changes.

Answer 4

I am a very touchy feelie kinda person but my wife is not so we have to work out the differances between being too touchie and not being touchie enough. Money is nice and when you dont have enough we seem to argue but if we have surplus it seems that we are more relaxed. And, I love my job but my wife does not and is looking.

Answer 5

your thesis statement sounds good. If that is what your paper is about then don't worry about it. U just kind of need to some it up and it looks like u did just that