My very first poem, what do you think?

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My very first poem, what do you think?

here is the link

i would just like feedback // comments as it is my first poem. i do not write poems for fun, i do it because it helps me with life

http://www.lovelandia.com/archive/the_one_regret

2007-03-14 19:20:10 · 2 answers · asked by 281 Playa 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities

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MAKES ME THINK OF MY BOYFRIEND AND I THINK THINGS WILL GET BETTER FOR YOU.

2007-03-15 12:54:19 · answer #1 · answered by K8 1 · 0⤊ 0⤋

I agreed with the people on the other site, it does seem to have a song flow to it, and very nice. Fortunately, I have a very good relationship, but it does make me think of others who haven't had it so easy. A+

2007-03-19 21:45:33 · answer #2 · answered by hUsH 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋