Can anyone please help me proof read this paragraph?

Question

The English Church was established and Catholics were denied from their rights to vote. The religious freedom of Catholics in Maryland was restricted until after the Revolutionary War.
Catholics have suffered when their rights have been prevented. Catholics have not always fought for their rights as well as they could have. At the same time, the struggle of Catholic leaders, among both the clergy and laity, has greatly improved the human rights of the entire country. The Catholic Church has made great contributions in many areas in the United States in its schools, its hospitals, and charitable works. Catholics have also made significant contributions in the United States in science, literature, the arts, and social justice

Answer 1

The Church of England was established and Catholics were denied their right to vote. The religious freedom of Catholics in Maryland was restricted until after the Revolutionary War.
Catholics have suffered when their rights have been taken away. Catholics have not always fought for their rights as well as they could have. At the same time, the struggle of Catholic leaders, among both the clergy and laity, has greatly improved the human rights of the entire country. The Catholic Church has made great contributions in many areas in the United States such as: its schools, its hospitals, and its charitable works. Catholics have also made significant contributions in the United States in science, literature, the arts, as well as in social justice.

Answer 2

The English Church was established which resulted in Catholics being denied their rights to vote. The religious freedom of Catholics in Maryland was restricted until after the Revolutionary War.
Catholics have suffered when their rights have been taken away. Catholics have not always fought for their rights as well as they could have. At the same time, the struggle of Catholic leaders, among both the clergy and laity, has greatly improved the human rights of the entire country. The Catholic Church has made great contributions in the United States in its schools, its hospitals, and charitable works. Catholics have also made significant contributions in the United States in science, literature, the arts, and social justice.

Answer 3

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Answer 4

jumps around too much. gramatically correct though.

Answer 5

~Read it backwards -word by word-
~Read aloud