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Here is the thing. Look at the previous answer and continue the story. Feel free to write a couple of words, a sentence or a whole paragraph.
There is no genre to this story. No plot. No main characters. Just do as u wish.
It's for my physics class and it is due last year.

Here, I will go first:
Two naked ants were taking a sun bath in the desert when all of the sudden, the female ant found out that the sun lotion she was using wasn't the right degree, and that her husband was cheating on her with a mosquito.
"That's the best I could come up with, It took me 4 weeks of writing and rewriting. Please help me make it a story. I think I got something big in the making here"

2007-03-14 13:33:32 · 10 answers · asked by Anonymous in Travel Africa & Middle East Egypt

Hey Cassandra,
Yes, it is 3. I couldn't rise above the "pettiness" of 3.
I don't know what you do for a living. But I think you would be a great school principal, or you could serve as a medicine for people who suffer from diarrhea. I think u have enough constipation to go around.

2007-03-15 00:40:11 · update #1

10 answers

so, the female ant lies and mentions how good the sunlotion is, and how it would make any female insect so happy and a good companion, and how that if a male insect got it to a female one, that will show her how much he cares for her.

so, her husband, believing her lie, gives one to his mosquito girlfriend!

the mosquito dies. the female ant had already known that (u know, being female and knowing all that beauty stuff) and her husband goes to jail because the female judge that was on his case assumed it was common knowledge that this particular sunlotion is no good for mosquitos, and charged him with murder of the first degree.

and the female ant lives happily ever after!! :)

2007-03-15 01:07:49 · answer #1 · answered by Stratomanssy 5 · 1 0

WHAT???
I can only think of three possibilities here...
1. You meant something other than physics (the scientific study of physical forces and qualities) and you mean it's due later in the year not last year, even though you want it for tomorrow... hmmm?
2. Your instructor is really bad either for not understanding physics, giving you meaningless busywork, or for giving you an open ended assignment without qualifiers and guidelines. Also obviously an instructor who would still be accepting papers a year after they were due is seriously demented.
3. You are either trying to see how stupid people really are for not noticing the mistakes or you are playing a joke.
I'm assuming (and hoping) it's 1. You seem to be (from other posts you have made) intelligent enough to come up with something better than this and hopefully intelligent enough to point this out to an instructor in the wrong. Also, I would hope your above the pettiness of 3.
If you really are writing a story for a class try expanding on what you've got and giving it an ending. First, you don't need to mention that the ants are naked since all ants are... they don't wear clothes, I don't think they can find anything in their size ;) Second you could easily elaborate this story. Start with them waking up. They decide what their going to do that day and decide to sun bathe in the desert. Maybe the husband acts suspiciously as a precursor to the wife finding out he cheated or will cheat. Did the husband pack the worng sun lotion because he wants to sabotage his wife? Did the wife make an honest mistake? What happens to her because of it. Is she nearly dead? Does she look funny? Does she have painful sunburn? Did the husband meet the mosquito while sun bathing or did it happen in the past. How does it end??? Do the ants forgive and forget? Does the mosquito suck the blood of one of them till they die or nearly die? What happens to the mosquito? Does the wife take revenge on the mosquito? Does the wife confront the mosquito? Do the mosquito and wife band together to get even with the husband for what he's done?
Also why the heck did you post this in the Egypt Travel forum???

2007-03-14 23:53:18 · answer #2 · answered by cassandra581 6 · 0 1

The female ant, we will call her Mary, decided to attack her husband and shot him with a crossbow. The husband obviously deflected the arrow with his mustache, which sent the arrow toward his wife's feet, but the arrow instead impailed the mosquito, which led to the husband's suicide by hand grenade. And even after all these tragic events Mary never received her right sun lotion. This upset Mary and sent her into a mad rage. Mary began to attack many other mosquitoes blaming them both for the killing of her spouse and she not receiving her sun lotion. During her life span the ant Mary was never caught for her killing extravaganza, she never was arrested and lived until she was 102 in small cottage on the North Shore of Europe. Before her death, Mary tried to event a large device meant to block out the sun, because she still had blamed the sun for the death of her husband.

2007-03-14 21:01:46 · answer #3 · answered by Ian W 1 · 1 0

She didn't tell her husband that the sun lotion was useless, and encouraged him to continue to use it. Shortly, she went inside on the pretext of making lunch. Her husband continued to sunbathe, and soon perished from sun and heat stroke. Served him right for his little affair with the mosquito.

2007-03-14 20:46:38 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 3 0

realizing her relationship with her husband was in dire straits really BUGGED her. She set her plans in action. First she went to her neighbor and asked to borrow the cat. The neighbor agreed after hearing her dilemma. She thanked him , closing the door behind her she was off. As she drove hap hazardly, tears streaming from her eyes and confiding her troubles to the cat they seemed strangely attracted to each other. After repeated eye contacts they knew they had found their soul mate in one another. They embraced and confessed their love . They never went to the desert for her plan of revenge, instead they turned around and went to be married. After consummating their marriage they were blessed with young ones. I was honored with knowing this couple and I remember my conversation with a stranger one day as he pointed to their off springs and said," what is that"?,I replied "cant".

2007-03-16 06:04:39 · answer #5 · answered by steve b 5 · 1 0

so it's due last year??!! :)) :))
u reminded me of a movie for Ahmed Zaki "Elbih Elbawwab" where he was singing "yoom elkhamis kan bokra yebaa eltalat kan aih?"
to rephrase it in English " Thursday was tomorrow, then what was Tuesday?"

2007-03-15 15:15:19 · answer #6 · answered by Ruby 6 · 1 0

wait til the antiquitoes come out and you wont have to worry about writting anything for psycics tommorrow it will all be over ,seen how many ants and mosies we got,

2007-03-14 22:27:37 · answer #7 · answered by gremlins 3 · 0 1

oh sorry i can't help u, i'm really bad in writing n in imagination but i liked the story somehow, yeah i laughed, it's crazy...u can say that the female ant decided to cheat on her husband too, so she bla bla bla. i really donno i'm bad at this lool

2007-03-15 04:27:29 · answer #8 · answered by ^Butterfly^ 4 · 0 0

then a giant foot crushed them both..

2007-03-15 02:12:55 · answer #9 · answered by Kalooka 7 · 1 0

Please god tell me this is for Forensics and not Physcics

2007-03-14 20:42:29 · answer #10 · answered by gvfordo 2 · 0 0

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