Untitled..a poem?

Question

people come,
people go,
some you don't even get to know,
when they die
you try not to cry,
it's hard to lose them
but you never forget
or regret,
only remember the good
they understood,
no matter what
they could count on you,
to stop them from being blue,
now watching over you
they help to keep you anything,
but blue,
your guardian angel
they will always be,
and when it's your time to go home
they'll be there,
to welcome you,
then
that's the day you'll be together,
again,
forever,
eternity,
as long as you live above,
in heaven

Brittany Dare Foy(c) 2007

Answer 1

Nicely done (as one writer to another). Always keep writing and never listen to those who are jealous of your ability.

Curious here as to how long it took to write this and if you edited it more than once?

And, if this is your work - please place a (c) copyright 2007 by yourname at the end of it, to protect your rights!

The Ol' Sasquatch Ü

Answer 2

Hun, I know you feel all of those words with all of your heart, but, "poetry.com" is looking for poet's that can ryhm just a tad bit more........I just recently got my book, with my poem in it, and my biography as well...... After a year of trying to get these people to understand I didn't want to become a "member" but just simply wanted to see my own, poem in my own book along with other "Amatuer" poet's, you know.. Its very "Expensive" to be a member. so I opted not too......But they kept on me,, and kept on me, to be a member, in which was so pricely I didn't know what to do... So, i simplly wrote them a letter telling them it has to be sent after all I invested in this book, (mind you without the cover I Paid for) they finally sent it to me!!! A---H---s!!! So, if you can afford too, log onto http://www.poetry.com.......Smilel!!!

Answer 3

OMG! SEND IT TO CHICKEN SOUP FOR THE TEENAGE SOUL!!